un-fuck-widable vs ChImNeY
 

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Check in by: 07-09-05 at 01:02 PM

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un-fuck-widable has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-09-05 12:34 PM.

ChImNeY has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-09-05 12:35 PM.

imma try sommik a lil different......take your time to read it voters....

Plead to your maker, maybee He'll savior/save-ya, but theres no stopping this, so neva say that your greater, or i'll be there serving till your ate Up, then shove binaculars down ya esouphagus just to see what your made off...

Your Fuckin wack-n'-you-know-it, Weakling, step in da Ring I'll swing yo Ass-to-da-Ropes punchin till you collaps-to-the-Flo' then watch you garggle Bloody Balls after I punt-cha Nutts to tha Back-ov-ya-Throat

It's 'Hate Crimes' the way I 'Beat-dis-Faggit', make him dissapear like dis here is Teaching-Magic, you cant win wit that wack shit, Nor 'Think outside the Box' so i'll be glad to burry ya mind 'Beneath-the-Casket'
'picture ya self addicted to blood loss' cuz when my punches come across ya 'develope Bleeding-Habits'.. cuz the screaming fact is you seem tha wackest wit phrases cuz your career couldn't 'Raise Hairs' if ya job was 'Breeding-Rabbits'...

I'll rip your raps apart with darkness, dam, I thought you had some smart witt, regardless, I sliced your cardiac in two's to show you how to have/halve some Heart Kid...

yea you got served...


-peace out-

Ok. Just-Save-It-C, Because By The Looks Of It Youve Just Been To KFC
And How you Said No Time Limit "Lazily", Heres "Weight Watchers", Now youll Be Praisin-Me
Its All About this bitch chimney, Until A Day Ago No One Had Seen-Or-Heard-yah*1
All The Effort Of "Clicking" A Mouse Has Grown an Appetite, Now he Needs-A-Burger
I Aint Usually the One To Pick-A-Fight, But your The sort After Cutting A "Cake" To Lick-The-Knife
This Bitch-Is-Right, "ICEWORKS" Should Have Made Your "CLOTHES", Because My *Sig-Is-Tight
And Look At Your Fucked Up Hair-Game, No Wonder You Aint On Long, I Bet Youve Bent All Ya Chair-Frames
Ever Heard Of Duck Tape? Use It As Hair-Tape, And Id Advise You To See A Doctor Because Your Going Pear-Shape
Im Comfortable, But You Look At "Anyone" And I Think Whats Got-You-Brudy, Was Afraid Id Accept This Battle
I dont Think Anyones Feeling Your Shabby-Trend, And You Make A Right Pair Along with Your Batty-Friend
I Didnt Want This To Sadly-Commence, Because Your Too Much Of A "Loser" For This To Badly-End

jus sum shit come on spit yours man

Ok. Just-Save-It-C, Because By The Looks Of It Youve Just Been To KFC
And How you should have Said No Time Limit "Lazily", Heres "Weight Watchers", Now youll Be Praisin-Me
Its All About this bitch chimney, Until A Day Ago No One Had Seen-Or-Heard-yah*1
All The Effort Of "Clicking" A Mouse Has Grown an Appetite, Now he Needs-A-Burger
I Aint Usually the One To Pick-A-Fight, But your The sort After Cutting A "Cake" To Lick-The-Knife
This Bitch-Is-Right, "ICEWORKS" Should Have Made Your "CLOTHES", Because My *Sig-Is-Tight
And Look At Your Fucked Up Hair-Game, No Wonder You Aint On Long, I Bet Youve Bent All Ya Chair-Frames
Ever Heard Of Duck Tape? Use It As Hair-Tape, And Id Advise You To See A Doctor Because Your Going Pear-Shape
Im Comfortable, But You Look At "Anyone" And I Think Whats Got-You-Brudy, Was Afraid Id Accept This Battle
I dont Think Anyones Feeling Your Shabby-Trend, And You Make A Right Pair Along with Your Batty-Friend
I Didnt Want This To Sadly-Commence, Because Your Too Much Of A "Loser" For This To Badly-End

wrote dat cause i dun the thing wrong so jus as i cant edit s read second 1

upping........................................dont sleep on dis vote an i will return the favour!

yeah..................dont sleep............................................

upping............................................ ..........

Uppin This........................................

upping vote ppl!!!!!!!!!!...................................

This was feedback posted for ChImNeY
 

LOL Nice

Un-fuck-widable is an alias, not sure who tho, hmmmm

anyway, good drop, you got this...

Voted For: un-fuck-widable

un-fuck-widable won this, his verse was a straight battle verse, all punches, and nice rhyme structure, with good flow.

Chimney, you had som nice punches, I really liked the the Raise Hairs Breeding Rabbits bit, Dope shit. But you both got shit to learn about text, and that involves making it look appealing, and readble.

I know it dont seem like that shit matters, but most of the time it does.

Anyway, Nice verses from both of you, but un fuck wins with a nice verse packed with punches

Voted For: un-fuck-widable

i vote for UFW

UFW;
your verse was good...structure was terrible but your flow was nice and vocabulary was nicely used here...punches were good hit pretty hard and personals was decent....opener was aight coulda been worded better and closer was ok...good drop

Chim:
your verse was ok...structure was better than his and flow was good...but punches was lackin a bit and personals aswell...opener was ok and closer was decent just keep it up and youll get better,,,decent drop

RTF link in my sig....~1~