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The Escape...
The Escape
…the escape of a nightmare…  From a nightmare I awake, to a vial and wretched stench I find myself lonely, lying on a frozen park bench “Where am I?” I whispered, no sight of my home This place I stand and roam captures me as alone In the far I see a stone, covered in ashes… Blood stains on the cement floor, from possible slashes This place scares me, brings my bones in a clash My teeth rattle and shiver, while the cold air blasts Not knowing my surroundings, unsure of where this is… I notice a sloppy carving on the bench of where I sit “Captured” it read, a word I’ve spoken and said The last memory in head was sleeping dearly in my bed I’m dazed in a horrific maze, no way to get out… I’m scared for my life, and terrified to speak or shout “Are there people here?” I ask myself and wonder Observing the filthy stone, and notice something under I grabbed with sweaty hands, a letter covered in blood Afraid to read the content I throw it in a puddle of mud Now fearing for life, I dash for a safe escape… Headed for the light peering through the ceiling gape Early it seems, as the sun glistened the place A mind race, while my heart beats at a fast pace I need to escape, knowing my family awaits… Or will I sit here and wait ill I enter the pearly gates? I’m destined to be free, and destined to live… Seeing im only a child, I know I have a lot to give I sprint to the abandoned letter, an object I must read My fingers tare the paper, giving me a scare I don’t need I carefully take it out, being gentle as skin… To not read would cry a sin, I release the pride within “The nightmare is over” a break I so needed to take… Conscious awakes as I escape from my dream state #1 #2 |
wow I really got into this, enjoyed it, you used the pic really well too, mad props to you, keep writing.
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thanks, But leave more feed next time please.
Uppin |
yo i really liked this foreal lil nigga
“Captured” it read, a word I’ve spoken and said The last memory in head was sleeping dearly in my bed I’m dazed in a horrific maze, no way to get out… I’m scared for my life, and terrified to speak or shout “Are there people here?” I ask myself and wonder Observing the filthy stone, and notice something under I grabbed with sweaty hands, a letter covered in blood Afraid to read the content I throw it in a puddle of mud ^that was nice good job 4'11 nigga |
Thanks Jace
im 5'3 fool |
Yea this shit is nice man. I loved the flow. Flowed perfectly whren I read. Good imagery as well. kept my interest. real nice shit. keep it up. pc one.
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Thanks Spul
Get me in Establishment y0 Upp |
yeah this was a good drop, everything in it was excellent, imagery and emotion stood out the best though, keep it up man
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Thanks
Upp ^^^^^^^ |
Yea good shit man deep I thought you was fallin off in the middle but you stayed up Good work fam
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word, yo I made a thread in TE. ~_~ |
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wtf ^
die word ? and word to Spul |
nice imagery good stuff liked it enjoyed it hell it woz hot
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