blackfrostbite vs 4fil
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-17-05 at 08:45 PM

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Hello..........

4fil has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-14-05 08:49 PM.

blackfrostbite has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-14-05 08:57 PM.

yo cuz,leave da block,you a pest in da streets/
killin' you wit dis will be part of 4 fillin my destiny/
yo you ain't a sindicator of crime/
how can you be in da streets plottin' when you can't write a decent rhyme/
look homie im more of a killer dan you need an example/
check out how im makin you commit suicide wit dis one rhyme,and dis ain't even da preamble/
ya life ya gamble,when ya tuoch mics wit me/
cuz what da fight seems to be,will be over within a mintue,better believe me/

good luck holmes!!!!!!!!!!!
uuuuuuuuppppppiiiinnnnn
post nigga

If you dont get punches............. don't vote :thumbup:

*Ahem

The boys running and hiding.......... as if Will-a-peer just kissed him
With a Record of 1-0........... the only person he beat was the system
Fucked up ugly, slimey and beat.......... Yeah i'm talking bout your head
I'll make this pussie bloddy........... and i'm winning this battle period
The only time your dope......... is when you put those drugs into effect
It's in his name to bite........... and the coward went and stole my accept
It must have been cold when you got frostbite.. and actually quite scary
seeing this ugly fruit around believing somebody's gonna pop his cherry

All honest votes will be returned....................

Nice drop man....... Uppin for votes!

Voted For: 4fil

The boys running and hiding.......... as if Will-a-peer just kissed him
With a Record of 1-0........... the only person he beat was the system
^^^^^^^
good opener fil but didnt you already use this line 1nce before...any wayz great opener
Fucked up ugly, slimey and beat.......... Yeah i'm talking bout your head
I'll make this pussie bloddy........... and i'm winning this battle period
^^^^^^
haahah good werd play..but i think you used this line as well before... ahh dunno
It must have been cold when you got frostbite.. and actually quite scary
seeing this ugly fruit around believing somebody's gonna pop his cherry
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
lmfao..... good stuff here fil ... good wer play

overall vote has to go 2 fil he takes this out wit ease..... Frost you wack.... nuff said..

Fil took this overall wit Punches. ..lol which were hard
pretty good flow and structure..
aiight vocab... << but you could wrk on it and get way better... good stuff fil...

Voted For: 4fil

flow-4fil
personals-neither
punches-4fil
multis-4fil
structure-4fil
enjoyment-4fil
creativity-4fill

fav line

The only time your dope......... is when you put those drugs into effect
It's in his name to bite........... and the coward went and stole my accept

this battle was onesided IMO but both of ya keep doing what ya doing and stay up
vote-4fill

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(x)eed what you saying bout using those lines before?
I'm pretty sure that they are original cause i just freestyled this here and now....

^^^^^^^^^^^
my bad ..... sorry aiight...

4fill your gonna vote on that link i put when i voted cause it will be appreciated if you vote and vote honestly aight fam............~1~

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ man... thnx 4 votin aiight... agreed on my battle and his..but stop askin peepz to like forcefully vote on ur battle

Voted For: 4fil

yo cuz,leave da block,you a pest in da streets/
killin' you wit dis will be part of 4 fillin my destiny/
^^That nice to know ya wanna kill him & all....but where da punch?
yo you ain't a sindicator of crime/
how can you be in da streets plottin' when you can't write a decent rhyme/
^^^basic and stretched out
look homie im more of a killer dan you need an example/
check out how im makin you commit suicide wit dis one rhyme,and dis ain't even da preamble/
^^^stretched out and whack
ya life ya gamble,when ya tuoch mics wit me/
cuz what da fight seems to be,will be over within a mintue,better believe me/
^^just stop.........

Lmao...this verse was horrible.I mean....for starters.U didn't have any punches or flow.U ain't got either one....you lost.Learn not to stretch your lines.Make them even.Get some wordplay and metas.And stop glorifing yourself....just diss the other guy man.Plus get rid a that newb structure.

The boys running and hiding.......... as if Will-a-peer just kissed him
With a Record of 1-0........... the only person he beat was the system
^^OK......but not really all that hot
Fucked up ugly, slimey and beat.......... Yeah i'm talking bout your head
I'll make this pussie bloddy........... and i'm winning this battle period
^^^1st line was good...but period lines are played.Didn't rhyem though
The only time your dope......... is when you put those drugs into effect
It's in his name to bite........... and the coward went and stole my accept
^^^Set up nice....but punch lacked
It must have been cold when you got frostbite.. and actually quite scary
seeing this ugly fruit around believing somebody's gonna pop his cherry
^^^OK...........

U raped the other guy in bassically every catergory.Verse wasn't a masterpeice.....but still way better than other guy's one.Every bar had some sort of wordplay.....which is really good.Next time try to add up a few personals.Get some decent concepts as well.Like that period shit....played.Got good stucture....but make every bar rhyme next time.

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