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Sincere vs Sin`cere
Battle Rules:
.....LOSER WILL HAVE TO CHANGE THERE NAME....IF THEY DONT THEY'll GET BANNED.....WHEN U ACCEPT THIS BATTLE U ARE AGREEING TO THIS STIPULATION... 6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 08-23-05 at 02:21 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Sincere has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-05 02:21 PM.
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Sin`cere has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-05 02:22 PM.
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This guy took my name but really I got ur profile link
And ur punches are like Dinosaurs they became extinct Like punches to ur face ill make them hurt like taking out a liver You not the real sin`cere so like Drive-Thru Joints you do not-deliver Then u claim that I bited ur name cmon u newbie y u so mean? Must be faking like actors so ill quickly make him a deleted scene Acting like u me man, I love the fans but biting my name is wrong U had two mistakes one was calling u sincere and u typing www.rapverse.com Cuz I just embarrassed u and made u look like change in my pocket He lame at rhyming so after this they’ll call u tha RV Andy Milonakis -------------------- EZ understandable....jus click the link wurr it says profile link to see that he jus joined today....and the punches are done...if u dont undastand PM me...or do not vote.... All honest votes will be Returned Honestly so PLZZZZZ VOTE.... |
Sin'cere the "King? nah" he better be packin a "Ace" More like "Queen" lookin like he got "Jack'd" in the face Insecure about his sexuality but he "pussy" by nature I'll speakingly rape ya like having simon cowel rate ya Cause this "American Idol" is quite spiteful Mommy had a mouthful of YOU like a sprite-full Of cum spew similar to the way im "cumin" at you Lookin "special" whats your name "Ed" when you runnin at dude Im a Individual you stayin "cingular" no game its critical (single) My shits "blind" fury and next to mine...you showin up Un "visible" |
wuteva........ok battle is set uppin for votes......
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lmfao @ that no punch havin peice of jibber jabbish you called a verse....uppin
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Voted For: Sincere
Sincere the first bar was tight hahaha... i like the play on the cards, i thought it was gonna flop but it was pretty decent. The simon cowel/ American Idol lines was decent. I wasn't feeling the spritefull line and the cum line. The ending was straight. Flow was good, some concepts are overly used on here, but you found a way to switch it up in a clever way. The best bar was prolly the first one..You even had a line of wordplay.. you could step that up some. Seems like you wrote this in 10 minutes. Take your time and write up some better set-ups. Sin'cere the first bar wit the profile link, what were you tryna get at? The dinosaur line is overly used and not flipped creatively. the start of the second bar.. Like punches to ur face ill make them hurt like taking out a liver You not the real sin`cere so like Drive-Thru Joints you do not-deliver ^^ what's wrong with this, is the double "like" in the first half.. that's annoying. The second half was decent at best. Your verse started to get weaker as you went on. And the last bar was a punch at yourself because it didn't rhyme and you said "he lame at rhyming" in that same bar. And your metaphors were extremely basic, work on better set-ups for metaphors if you gonna use them. -_-.. I don't know who either of you are, just ran into this battle to see which verse is better.. Y'all both could do a little better, but eh.. It was a decent battle. My vote's the Sincere without the apostrophe. |
This was feedback posted for Sin`cere
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Voted For: Sin`cere
Vote: Sin'cere Sincere.... ya verse was kinda wack... a lot of your bars were just way to basic.... the punches werent that hard... some of them were but most of them werent... your opener wasnt that great.... but your closer was good Sin'cere.... ya verse was good... more creative and harder than Sincere.... since this was a change your name battle... you actually had a bar or two about it.... punches were much harder... opener wasnt that good.... closer was good and funny |
This was feedback posted for Sincere
checkin pollz.....................................
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This was feedback posted for Sincere
Insecure about his sexuality but he "pussy" by nature
I'll speakingly rape ya like having simon cowel rate ya ^^ ive read that bar somewere before. |
ohhhhh werd he prolly bit that from sum where jus like he bit my name.....lmfao....up......
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nah i dont bit rhymes or names an hurry up an vote so i can get this W kid is wack......
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im wack when u copied my name and have some wack ass verse that has nothin to do wit me no personals so shut the fuck up....and change ur name bastard......
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