"Unlucky"...SNIPPET of some New L.E Music
 

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Cheeeckkkk it out.

"Unlucky"

First Verse and Hook

Beat by Shadowville.

Let me know what you think.

lol @ come hard on a track.....gotta change my pants.

This could be a tight track man. I like the hook a lot, but I think you should rerecord it a little and try to smooth it out a bit. And at that "Click bam" part in the hook you should add a good sounding gun, not a really fake one. I like the whole theme of the track though man.....good shit :thumbup:

Lol thanks man.

Yeah I am throwing in some sound effects...actually what happened is that I originally recorded it in four line segments, and then when I went to save the wavs I didn't save the session. I had to put them all back, and I know I didn't get it exact...So I have to rerecord it anyway.

I just thought I would throw it up now.

Thanks for the feedback though man. :thumbup:

You know what I love most about RV?

Getting and giving feedback for songs.

So, I'll return the favour and shit.

I know.....its a lost art on RV. I remember the days I would go to the songs page and just leave feed for everyone on the first page. Shit like that doesn't happen anymore. Ohh well man :thumbup:

not bad man, agree with E tho, reflow the whole verse, and try to up flow spots, etc. Also try some cadence switching as its a kinda monotone verse, which, fits the beat, but it doesn't stand out from it.

$0.02

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Thanks for the advice man.

no dizzoubt. now get on msn foo.

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Lol I'm working till ten.

Moonlight Madness sale. :(

Hook's hot...if I had a decent mic I'd volunteer to hop on this...

Thanks man. And we can hop on a collab someday for sure.

One of the questions I actually wanted to ask is what everybody thinks of the quality...if anybody has any feedback on that, I would like to hear it for sure.

If this had a pussy I'd eat it, son. Also, just curious, do you know how to pronounce ennui? French pronounciations. I thought it was en-you-eye at first.

"En wee"

French word. I dropped the name as soon as I found out.

En wee? I'm pretty sure it's on-we. Unless en is the same was on..mhm.

Ahh!

You're too smart for me.

-Brain Overloads-