Caustik vs. Iverson03
 

ok drop when ready

checkin in, ima drop in a lil bit

yo iverson ill split ya shit wit the gun of yo choice/i got '5' 'nines' so u can call me "royce"/--------

My essential mental credentials are evident when i pencil...../use prehensile claws to stencil on ya jaws with utensils/

my pencil scratches sensible, principal emcee wit invincible principles/ invisble strings i pull to control affairs international/

I use-an indusive hallucenogen seclude minds in a lucid spin/ conjure a pollutant solution that can fusion the illusion of evolution/-------------

Sacramental sacrifices performed with dental torture devices~
Entice the Goddess Isis(Iverson) to lyse any foe's iris with a virus//
I snipe targets with cybertronic cypher rockets wired with fiber optics//
Your lyrical vomit cant match the hyper demonic sonic vipers fonix//
Incite bubonic plague outbreaks, sickness from just steppin' outside is chronic//
Insightful sonnets enlighten the honest on topics like its Koranic//

THE BIG FINISH---------------lol....

AYO, this feminine cat gon' get a venomous slap for prendin to rap/need to hit back the medicine rap my flows are 'nice' like 'gentlemen acts'/
im rippin IVY like every mic and MC i get my hands on/leavin u used abused and worn like a bloody tampon/so send up the white flag and call out a mayday/cuz ur flow is about as TIGHT as hookers pussies on payday//


Holla back, sorry for writin so much

This cat here thinks hes a gangsta when hes battalin an MC
But hes better off bein an English teacher with his use of vocabulary
This cat wanted a battle, instead he recieving the beating of a lifetime
You know its bad when the cops are tracin you with chalk and now people can only see your outline
This fags rhymes are as nice as a girl when she has PMS
and his rhymes is so wack, they send out a call of distress
Whenever I battle niggaz I cook them just like a Pop Tart
So when people vote against you you'll be sayin its because "HE HATE ME" like your Rod Smart
Throughout whole rhyme your lack of flow almost makes me shiver
But my all of my rhymes flow better than The Mississippi River
Im keepin this short and sweet cause i dont need to write a novel
This rap dont need to kill you, i need just enough to make you hobble
Cause your rhymes are weaker then a kid with a muscular disease
And my rhymes are hotter than the duo of Ladanion Tomlinson and Drew Brees
And unlike you i dont need a big finish to finish off my newest masterpiece
Cause after you read this rhyme your gonna feel like you've just been burnt with grease


if you didnt know, Rod Smart is "He Hate Me" from the XFL, that was his real name

nice verse, now uppin 4 votes,

nice rap to both, but i just felt iv alil betta.
he was hard but not to complexed with word play flippin back n fourth so much. i thought some of cau bars were just dictionary readings, no downin ya shit cuz it was still nice, but i thought iv took it ta da house!

my vote=iv

best line caustic
yo iverson ill split ya shit wit the gun of yo choice/i got '5' 'nines' so u can call me "royce"/--------

best line iverson
And unlike you i dont need a big finish to finish off my newest masterpiece
Cause after you read this rhyme your gonna feel like you've just been burnt with grease



vote caustic


dont count this i voted in the poll this is just for explaination

1-1, uppin more votes

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both were ill but
vote = caustic
gotta love the finisher....

^^^^

damn u like wrestling that much that was like 4 yrs ago

too bad the XFL was football

and by the Way, Rod Smart is in the NFL right now, and what, is there a law against including something in a rap that happened 4 years ago??