Deception vs. Knightshade
 

24 bars or less....I think that's it. uhhh rules? I dunno bout rules.


So they call you Knightshade? I'ma 'mmend it to lamp shade
cuz when your raps get laid, its an electricity down-grade
like flickin the fade switch, always get made bitch
lets just pull the plug... plead irreversible brain glitch
or lets keep you sputt'rin for humanitarian pardon
your boys chantin, save the whales, our retard an'
we wont unleash the fury of our notorious masses
who found their niche in 'how-to-rap for dummies' classes
for once step up an' defend your own weak ass
without every jackass, joinin my ode to shade leaked mass
your sorta like our pal Sedam in relation to rap
your shit be spam, but your crew's got your back
Goin... blah blah blah go herb elevate, he won
but your ass clearly states 'deception'... I'm done

this is too easy, sorry to make you lose.
 

I wanted competition, not wins from a wack novice/Or hear your fag tale’s of how how you make anal deposits/So please stop it/ You make profit by stealing jewels like BOBBIT (Lorena) /I rhyme with structure while you known to spit that non sence/
I’m the angry rapper cause I’m spitting MAD ~flows at ass~hole’s/ I’ll burry your ash tray (coffin) because you’re known to~back~ho’s (tobacco)/ I slap foe’s/ And verbally I will attack~those/ Who lyrics are played out like polyester and AFRO’S//
My battles like a phone book, cause aint no rippin it/ "I loved sucking your dick bro" ..Yea what ever just don’t MENTION it/ You be spittin mist/While I be causing verbal fit’s/ I was playing games with a fag/My bad../Tag your it//
I’ll wet Deception's body with a little secreted juice/ that’ll leave his facial appearance worst than that of beetle juice/I crack shells like a needle tooth/And I change clothes in phone booths/So a lost to KnightShade is what Deception is prone to//
I disguise (dis-guys) but never change my features I’m a creature on earth to teach deception a lesson like school teachers/I get lyrics from time~beakers/And trade them to mind~seekers/A glance at deceptions verse, most likely defines weaker//
Lyrically I’m a criminal, I’m destined to abuse~words/And your ADDICTIVE wack raps are painful cause the TRUTH HURTS /I dilute verbs/ And throw punches at subdue
Herbs/And Bitch my battles bring the ACTION so I don’t have to use~verbs//


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*walk's over to his pad takes a pencil and add's another X*

who the fuck is next?

Damn, KnightShade took this easily. That verse was ill.

Vote : KnightShade.

haha I'm gunna have to second that. I didn't realize it'd be such a big production. I figured I'd just have to flip a couple lines and it'd all be good. My bad?

ps. I'm a girl

sorry i ripped you, heh im buzzed outa my ass at the moment, i just smoked a few blunts, anyways i was feeling creative, and thats just some of my average drops, wait till you see something complex from me ;) lol

Its all good. I'm more than happy to get my ass sat down by someone of your quality. It teaches my cocky ass some humbleness haha. I started freestylin to help with my future profession. My biggest problem as of yet is that I can never bring my A-game when I spit first. I always start off wack with some ABC.... 123 shit. And I get the line 'hi kids, do you like Primus? Wanna see me stick 9 inch nails through each one of my eyelids' stuck in my head. FUCKIN Eminem. haha If you had gone first I prolly woulda been able to emulate it a bit more. Do you prefer followin? Or does it matter?

i usally spit first, i like a chalange, give the person im battling the edge, makes my win worth my time


oh and calling me out isnt a great idea either.

haha but you got practice. I'm just a 21 year old fuckin white chick with a chip on her shoulders that needs to be able to talk fast and coherantly. Fuck man, this is brilliant. Everyone's gunna come in here and be like so...they battled, he fucked her up, and now they're having a polite fucking convo over tea and scrumpets. I'm out. Thanks for the lesson.

Wait...fuck... my future profession isn't rapping. Its sports journalism and announcing (thus the need for fast coherant language). Just to clear that up. haha *has evil visions of people comin in here goin' WHAT THE FUCK she thinks she's gunna make money off that shit?*

this battle... was pretty mediocre... neither had hard punches... Knight had more... hum...

Deception... nice verse for a beginner... needs some work... but you're off to a good start...


KnightShade... same... but here's an idea... NEVER... EVER... explain punches or wordplay... you can't do it on stage... don't do it here... makes you look like a herb... *shakes head* besides that... better job on the punches...


vote: Shade...

Avalon i think Shade knows a bit more about rap than you i mean Shade's got his own crew and 500+ posts you've not got a crew and only 24 posts i rest my case

uppin for real voters and non kid like haters

uppin

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I doubt it... posts mean shit... I mean... you have more posts than me right..? By your comment that means you can beat me... Let's see if you can junior mint...









Fuck a crew... I've owned and operated 1 crew... reigned a year and a half... on RM.com... I'm new here... not to "rapping"... Fuckin netcees... I swear... can't live for em... couldn't get hated without them...