fgee v.s. blunt-mc
 

like I said.. 20 lines or 10 bars...
normal vote rules...
drop within 3 hours....

this herb's lame with a cranium capacity of a bird brain.//
the pain of this verse is surpassin' his worst day.//
mis-placed an' dazed afta I flip this rhyme and spin it around.//
switch tha style.. check it out...//
I got no need for-four when I got a nine.//
cock back one line an' fire with the aim of a sniper ta pierce ya mind.//
you eva been ta jail.. let me guess.. NO, bitch I'm-a lifer.//
29 timer, more to come, I can kill anyone with nuthin' but one punch.//
there it was an' you laid tha fuck out! get tha fuck out.//
you crashin' like columbia never touched down.//
ya, you bus rounds.. gat? nah, talkin' bout suckin' dick.//
ya got so much head it's a surprise ya-ain't got no brain, mahn's invelid.// (invalid... needed the soft e sound)
it's like god forgot to insert intelligence, 'cause anythin' you spit's irrelevent.//
your rhyme sounds like shit, fuck.. I could shit on my rhyme an' it would still embellish it.//
you need ta garnish ya cypher with quotations an' line bites ta ever sell tha shit.//
fuck this, bitch where you live, I'm-a make you smell tha fist.//
break ya nose flat.. take ya chain an' ya ecko hat.//
tha clothes off ya back, an' those russle simmons ya rockin' gimmeh dem.//
I told you this verse would rip you man.//


edited to add the bold parts....

u must be from japan cos u've sent urself on a kamikaze mission/
voluntary suicide i'm about to send u into demolition change ur features beyond recognition/
i therefore conclude ur retarded,cos ur limbs are about to be departed,how u supposed to move that wheelchair with no arms to start it?/
u'll come back with some fake gangsta shit, 'i'll put my glock in ur mouth and watch ya head split', bullshit just quit/
i don't need weapons,use my keyboard handin out 'CAPITAL punishment', got u all 'LOCKed' up ascend ur life into descent/
it's a well known fact u can't rap, reinvent ur image become a comic act/
just have to show ur face to make the audience laugh,they'll piss themselves n' split their sides in half/
an embarassment to urself and ur friends,u cock suck tryin to make amends, like saddam a dick-tator, your life on thin 'ice' like an overweight skater, ur life on 'the rocks' i'm not a hater,just have some respect for a rapper who's greater/
my rhymes are original with varied complexion,sharper than most like a serated projection, inflicting wounds causin mass infection/
kill u off quicker than lennox fighting a 10 year old,no second 'resurection' this lyrical 'aliens' body turns cold/
but lo and behold,elite front lines is barren of votes,and if u get any they'll just be misquotes

good drop
uppin this bitch

yea.. not too bad ya-self..

I can move this 2 front lines now.. I'm done one of my battles... so I'm-a see if one of the mods will do that...

yeah good idea cos it's gettin slept on big time in here

moved.

uppin

vote=fgee
this battle was real coo
fgee's lines had some good punches and multis
blunt mc was coo too but someone gotta take a vote so it goes to fgee
coem vote on
xplicit vs. vendetta
j.smith vs. vendetta

uppin

come on don't sleep on this,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

sleepers lick tate...

uppin'..

uppin again cos no one's voting
(half my posts are from upping battles)