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Chrit 04-07-03 01:58 PM

Chrit vs. Metapyhsical one (vote and we vote on urs)
 
Aight...
10-15 lines
standard rules
3 ko
5 win


spit whenever kid

metaphysical one 04-07-03 03:19 PM

AIIGHT, CHRIT, YOU KNOW HOW I COULD TELL YOU'RE A FAGGOT, YOU JERKOFF?// (1)
BECAUSE OUT OF ALL THE PICTURES OF X YOU PICK THE ONE WHERE HE HAS HIS SHIRT OFF// (2)
AND IF YOU TRY TO RESPOND TO THIS, JUST SAVE YOUR STORY FAIRY// (3)
IT'S NOT MY FAULT YOU FORCED ME TO MAKE THIS TEXTUAL TERRITORY INTO A HOMOSEXUAL MORTAURY// (4)
BUT ANYWAY, LET'S GET PAST YOUR SEXUAL PREFERNCE// (5)
AND RETURN TO YOUR WEAK RYHMES AS MY POINT OF REFERENCE// (6)
TRYIN' TO FIND A WACK LINE IN YOUR SHIT// (7)
IS LIKE LOOKIN' FOR HAY IN A HAYSTACK, THAT'S ALL THERE IS// (8)
YOUR METAPHORS ARE PLAYED OUT LIKE CLICHES// (9)
YOU WOULD THINK YOU'RE STANDIN' ON A FAULT LINE THE WAY I MAKE YOUR KNEES SHAKE// (10)
LIKE THE STOCK CRASH OF '29 I'LL LEAVE YOU IN A GREAT DEPRESSION// (11)
I WOULDN'T HAVE THIS EFFECT ON YOU IF YOU DIDN'T HAVE SO MUCH INVESTED// (12)
NOT LONG IS HOW LONG YOUR SPOT AT THE TOP''LL LAST// (13)
SO GO CALL ANDRE AND BIG BOI CAUSE, BITCH, NOW YOU'RE 'N OUTKAST// (14)

I SNUCK AWAY FROM CLASS TO SPIT THIS SHIT - DIDN'T WANT TO KEEP YOU WAITIN'. ALRIGHT BITCH, IT'S ON YOU . . .

Chrit 04-07-03 03:41 PM

Aight look

Metaphysical one I'm bout to make you my son, fuck a gun I see you run in fear of this battles outcome
Better watch your tone cause your record will soon be 0 and 1
When it comes to "meta"'s and wordplay I am the only "one"
Leave you "physical"ly scarred and bowing to the true top gun
My graveyard filled with punks like you that got merked
8 lines of gay jokes, and two wordplays and you think that shit worked?
I got news for ya kid.. spit much more bullshit and your ass will face a bid
See you broke the law with that caps-lock
Cock this mic back, break your jaw and weight for the polls to show you cant hold my cock
Fuck a beat and a ryhme, this dumb little bitch ran outta time
Chrit's like a coke line, fuck you up worse time after time
Give you sign language case you cant hear it
C-H-R-I-T is the name and soon you will fear it
Kill me, shit death is a fear of the living... it doesnt phase an emcee that rose to be an omnipresent being

Chrit 04-07-03 03:48 PM

uppin for poll votes



ya'll know how it works

DNV 04-07-03 04:10 PM

at first my vote was going to meta... but...

chrit had it with the first line

"Metaphysical one I'm bout to make you my son, fuck a gun I see you run in fear of this battles outcome"

Chrit 04-07-03 04:12 PM

Thanks for the vote

1-0

DaviD WoRdplay 04-07-03 04:38 PM

Meta lacked the flow to counter the punches Crit threw at him...

voted for Crit

Chrit 04-07-03 04:48 PM

2-0 uppin for ko

metaphysical one 04-07-03 05:08 PM

What the fuck, is everyone blind?
he rhymed "one" 3 times in the first three lines
and "gun" twice in the just about the same amount of time
and these lines were the only decent part of his verse
hey, Chrit, a little creativity never hurt

metaphysical one 04-07-03 05:56 PM

uppin' 4 votes

MARX1 04-07-03 06:15 PM

ayo look at the lyrical texture of metaphisicals shit the shit is mad ill d.n.v must be a faggot be cause he likes those easy rhymes like sun, gun, one fun, mann your not a lyricist your a rapper
if this is a vote on rappin it goes to chrit

BUT MY REAL VOTE SINCE THIS IS or shold be based ON LYRICISM GOES TO

METEPHISICAl !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!

MARX1 04-07-03 06:16 PM

meta those are probaly his homies so fuk them iam out

P.L.A.S.M.A 04-07-03 08:52 PM

ma vote goes to Crit cuz his shit had better punches


~`UnO`~

metaphysical one 04-07-03 10:29 PM

this is about lyricism
not one-syllablism
alr

metaphysical one 04-07-03 11:05 PM

uppin' for votes


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