Lyrikal Sword vs. Carsonjet
 

yo wud up dis da rules

10-20 lines /= a line
3=ko
5 to win
no bitin feedin crew noon dat shit if da poll closes we go by explained votes
due tomorrow which is da day afta today
doesnt matta who spits first
g'luck ill pm u wit dda link peoce

you wanna spit first or u want me to?

checkin in on dis one spititn 10 minutes

Just Drop Da Freakin Beat

think ya rimes be fast n powerful...cuz ya avatar is sonic/
spiitin from an elavated postion words comin complex u think im... diabolic/
ima fiend ta freestylin call me a vet betta yet jus call me a...verbal threat/
verbal bombs explodin ya verse in air jus like ya so called... Carsonjet/
Lyrical nitroglycerin dispose ya skin to verbal nomonia/
punch ya str8 in ya eyes leave em bruised n open like if u had... verbal insomnia/
everyone gona kno u got dandruf cuz da lyrikal sword will leave ya head n shoulders on da beach/
ya verse jus rubber n im eatin ya up n tearin ya apart like tide bleach/
dis a unfound egyptian scripture ya cant touch it fo if ya do yall be verbally, n mentally demolished/
i spit so much on ya take a towel wipe ya face n der ya be polished/

ova only 10 lines yea!!!

thank u waitin fo him now

^*-_LyriKly Insane_-*^
 

ok...........good luck mista lyrikal sword......




Yo....Lyrikly insane from Both my heads to all my toes//
Launchin Lyrikal missles at ALL apearant foes//
Now notice.......Didnt fire one misscle in ur Di.rection//
Ur Ryhmez R so wack not even worth an Anthrax In.fection//
The part of my brain that registers real Rapperz Didnt make a De.tection//
Your Ryhmes like Rupaul, Couldnt fake an E.rektion//
Pathic like Al gore, Tryna fake an E.lection//
Thought u wer battlin bak hard, But jus was my Re.flection//
Rappin 101 down da hall, Go take a few lessons//
Fuk a missle, I'll ball at ya Wit my Lyrikal fists//
Scorin on u is like gettin assists//
Got u shakin so hard wait.........is that piss?//
Congradulations Lyrkal Sword...... Uve made my bitch list//

Now im on the down Side....shit on top was too Nice//
My kind personAlity......hmmm.. gonna have to sacrifice//

So check it....I beat ur ass in a dark alley full of garbage//
Leave u for the Rats of newYork Full of Carnage//
Let em tear u apart till All remains are bone fragments//
Set up an alliby ....An make it Look jus like an Accident//
All that'll be left from U... would be Ur soul an Spirit//
And pray ta god I neva see It... Cuz if I do Then ima Tear it//
Name be CarsonJet an u betta Fuken Hear it//
An afta that... Recolect......An then begin ta Fear It//



Best of luck ta ya Sword...Peace

my b yo i went 3 lines ova......thought it was 20-25.....ahh well fuk it ......

hmmm
carson beat u wit better punches playa sorry but u tried.
both of u can calm down on that 'lyrical' 'verbal' lyrical' 'verbal' shit use words instead of using names for words.
thanx

vote jet

please vote on 1-n-gone vs skilo

i vote carsonjet, he had overall better punches, and it flowed better. i agree with 1-n-gone, cut down on the "lyrical" shit. gets annoying

vote=carsonjet

thanx fo votes peeps.....1 moe be a K.O.........

fuck ima get screwed againn yo but good job carson 2-0 fo him

HEY YALL, I I WOULDA VOTED HERE BUT I CANT CAUSE IM THE CREW MEMBER, BUT STILL HAVE SOME BALS AND VOTE ON MY BATTLE

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=42366

hmm i feel a lil dirt up in tha air.....2-0 then a crew memba votes.....

na yo i swear jus ill is a joker n likes ta play round

nah nah, i meant i would vote lol, i was talkin to my mom. i didnt vote, if i would have it would have been for carson tho, sorry sword, but his overall flow was better and sounded much nicer. but since im in the crew, my votes dont count

still come check out my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=42366