Fgee::::VS::::Rise
 

here's the rules

20 line max
no dik riding
haters
recycling
spit whenever

checkin in..good luck

I know this will be a good battle.........in the meantime yall hit up my battle wit Chrit..........i'll return the favor........poll votes.........1

fuck the introduction...lets begin


you wont get R.E.S.P.E.C.T, if your filler-was-like-aretha::
Its only takes 3-recites-to-beat-ya::
so "all day" I'll have you "dreamin about these 3lines"...like Killer-Mics-Adidas::

All day I, All day I, All day I, dream about sex!!

and you do to "faggot", thats the only time you do "Big Things"::
your words could not "circle" the compotition, if I gave you the "thumbs up", and you "Spit Rings"::
yours punches never connect, so you really need a hit, like a Sick Fiend::
shit..your drops arent worth watching, like basketballs, if the NBA only had 6 teams::

if you gave out money for every minute that peeps read your verse, it wouldnt be "worth the wait"::
this is not my first debate.....they say, your a big slash on RB, so I surf your face::

you cant get shit on lock, if your asshole done-crimes::
you should ride the bench, on-pine...cause logging in's the only time..your On-Line::

and the crowd wants more..soooo

sticks & stones will never hurt me, but my words break this boys bones::
*thats funny*..why does it say I'ma light weight, when fgee needs to get his wieght up like Roy Jones::
R-Us, is the only time he's bringing them "Toys" home::
these "Def Poets" wouldnt have to "Apply" them selves to beat you, even if you "Employed Poems"::

If RB kicked-out-faqs...you'll be getting "rolled-on", like "mouse-pads"::
dont think you have nice "cracks", just cause your more-ass....than a couch-had::

and dont think cause your "ass", that when I smack you, you will bounce-back::
cuase see fgee "I'm well rounded, and above your head", like a fucking Mickey Mouse-hat::

lol......let me put the finishing touch on this Masterpiece

He's a she, and she's a Bitch, so watch this Amatuer-Rip-Her::
because the only person that is looking at your verse fgee, is your Avator picture::

Good luck..you'll need it

Rise

u may be on the rise but i'm knockin u back down/
come to this battle smilin u'll leave with a frown/

u couldn't bring heat to this battle like striking wet matches/
ur so stupid when i throw punches u catch em/

full in the face send ya eyes and mouf to the back of ur head/
now ur seein backwards instead, and emitting shit from the same direction as ur ass in this thread/

i've read ur spits give ya compliments where they're due/
but u couldn't magnatise quality if words were made of iron fool/
they say opposites attract.....so wackness and good verses=you/

man this dudes so polite too he offered me first fuck of his bitch/
i said sorry but i dont bone she-males that switched/

ur in way over ur head in the land of a giant winner/
comin in short u couldnt finish me off like an anorexic at dinner/

if this battle was a cheque i'd cash it in before u split/
but it'd be rendered worthless as soon as u spit/

in ur avatar looks like ur pointing a gun, but i aint worried son cos ur shootin wit the safety catch on/

retarded shit u'd make simpletons look like smart folks, ur comin off worse than comedians telling poorly told jokes/


there u go............. (and dont go on what looks longest)

lol...Nice Try

Up for votes

**edit**

Oyea plz poll vote also

wtf u uppin it for?i just posted.....'nice try' by u to sway votes....

No nothing like that, I'm just trying to tell people its time to vote, you should know, i'm the farest person on RB bra

my bad about the nice try comment

lol

**edit**

anyway like I said, up for votes
No more free posts

LET ME READ THIS AGAIN......

another Rise Banger..lol

breakdown
punches:Rise
metas:rise....fgee's were kinda played
technique:rise
wordplay:niether
multis:Rise

Fgee your punches were kinda half assed and played, but nice battle to both

vote=Rise

uppin

aiight....here it is........this was a pretty good battle....i read it twice.....and after line for line i realized that rise threw some better punches and used good word play.......some i'm gonna have to go wit rise...........but good battle yall.......1

iight how I see this rise got'em on punches...shit was nice
wordplay was nice and rise had betta disses.

fgee came nice but he just had mediocre punches, a couple of played ones but it was iight ... not enuff heat tho!

vote rise