G Unit Brooklyn:::.vs.:::512
 

rules:
14 lines max
5 votes wins
or 3 is ko
no haters
spit ya shit asap

Polls Edited
-Axe

Yo I'll hit this when it's done aight, yo peep my shit til then.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=43406

LOOKING FOR TALENT IN 512 IS LIKE TRYING TO FIND A NEEDLE WITHIN HAY/

YOU'RE PLAIN "GAY",IN YOUR SPARE TIME HEARD YOU WEAR "ASSLESS CHAPS"/(SEE THA AVY)
I'M LIKE "TOO LOOSE OF A BLUNT”, LEAVE OPPONENTS MESSED UP WITH "ASHFUL LAPS"/

RHYMES ON-TAP, TWENTY-FOUR-SEVEN, EVERY DAY OF THE YEAR OR MAYBE A LIFE-TIME/
IN A WAY YOU'RE LIKE "CRIMESTOPPERS" EXCEPT YOU FEED OFF VERSES YOU DON'T "BITE-CRIME"/

COWERING WHEN IT'S FIGHT TIME, WHILE ME I'M JUST REACHING TERMINAL VELOCITY/
FLOW LIKE AN ENCHANTING WATERFALL, WHILE YOU A "DRIP-DRIPPING"FAUCET LEAK/

POSSIBLY, THESE WORDS ARE LIKE FISHING IN THE AMAZON, THEY SPEAR YOU, YOU'RE DEAD/
ANOTHER CHAPTER IN MY AUTOBIOGRAPHY CLOSED LIKE I DROPPED A CHANDELIER ON YOUR HEAD/

ill spit later i got shit do to

iight..
u gotta wite in all caps cuz that the only way u could spit big, my rhymes will go strait to ya heart and brake ya body like a twig//
he thinks im scared to reply to his wack verse, so hes prayin and gettin prepared for his rehearse//
go get the nurse guys i think he had a heat stroke, my lyrics are so hot and thick that this nigga will choke//
stop smokin cuz ya rhymes are already ashy as it is, ill get in to ya lil mind cuz im a lyrical wiz//
the only way you drop a descent verse is written and bitten, but ya wack pucnhes only be hittin and missin//

~out~

Lets get some votes

VOTE = 512

Gotta give it ta 512...Not cas i'm in a battle wit GUB...Some of GUB's didn't make sense ta me...Linez of his were also too long...512's linez were pretty long too but had a betta rhymin scheme.

Return tha favor 512:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=43548

1-0 uppin

lets get some mo votes

Uppin at 512, better verse, other cat didnt make sense...

2-1 lets get some more votes

512-u rule

ook.....3-1 uppin fo mo

lets get some more votes

uupin

vote- 512
that otha cat was trash....he lacked punches wordplay and a basic rhyme scheme