Ripper ve Spittin Quik
 

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10-15 lines
No crew/Hater votes
Poll votes determine winner
No feeding off others verse
Must check in.



This is my check in.

check in here after i finish this battle wit Saladin

aight

Aight,
this fool goes by the name of Spittin Quik, well he has 2 b if he's gonna suck dick after dick//
no need for discussion, i'll blow him up n say it woz human cumbustion , its disgustin//
ay yo i skribble invisible flows like ghostwriter, a live wire dynamite tied to a timer//
my battle records gonna b higher than the amount of times spittin quik wanks/
my flows will fuckin finish this faggot i might aswell b sendin blanks/
if u think ur gonna beat me ur gonna fuckin need a whole arsenal of tanks//
my flows endless while u use the same recyled lyrics coz u cant rhyme and think of ur own/
shit i'm the king and after this people will recognise dat i shud b sittin on the RB throne/
dont fuck wit me coz i'll beat u so bad i'll put u into shock and my victims kno that i'm prone//
2 do anything that i want at my own free will especially dickheads like u that i Rip 4 fun/
my rhymes r so hot ur gonna feel as if u been out 4 too long playin it the sun//
u think u spit rhymes dat are ill, the only time u'll b "ill" is wen u see me run down ur mama in a road kill/
dont come back 2 this verse after wit a weak response wit no punches, just rhymes dat fill/
i take time wit my rhymes and put in so much dedication, so do us all a favour and take a lethal overdose of ur medication//

poor i kno.
lookin 4 feedback on the verse. its hard 2 think wen ur at work wit lil inspiration.
uppin' 4 Quik.

aight thanx man

ill post in a min

aight dats cool

Aight look

Mic Check 1,2,3

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this kid's a plain fruit, i need something to gag-him-with, a plum or pear will do ..//1
cause man your doo.. your verse is like the GRIZZLY's in the OFF-SEASON, simply UN-BEARABLE.. //2
Don't tell me to Shoe, it's not my fault..YOU-DRAW the horsefly's when the SHIT-COMES//3
cause like the nba playoff brackets, Him winning would be MAGIC, nevertheless he'll still get's PISSED-ON(piston) //4
I rip-Joints with punches that gather-up like DBZ Games, multiple HIT-POINTS. . //5
cause Ripper winning is outta-wack . . .like observing THE POPE IN A STRIP-JOINT//6
it's a disaster that, i drowned him in my flow, then got commited of consecutive POOL-CRIMES//7
i mean, he's part of the "THE WACK SQUAD", my verse ate Ripper and left him with 2-LINES//8
i'll have u keepin an eye on my punches, as i take ya face n' i sock it(socket)/battle me? u've lost it, cuz not even wit jet fueled mics could u roc it(rocket)//9
like this kid's a droppin bible stock, ya jus a lost profit(prophet)//10
Ripper’s like a 13 year old (Ripper), someone told him to grow up, so he took a peanut n' dropped it//11
from Ripper u see nuttin but soft hits like punches from foam gloves//12
i'm known to be off the hook, so Ripper payed my bill n' hopes of makin phone love//13
Bones [i]slug[/u]ged(shot), covered in blood(Ripper) as i leave ya body in-sections//14
misdirection in battle(war), cuz this man's down like sloppy erections//ya can't copy perfection, cuz even if this kid bit me he'd still be 2nd rate//15
now it's time...(title) cuz like ya facin cannabilistic rapper in a second ya ate kid's representin hate, and when the battle is over let the spectators evaluate//16
this kid's whack n' doesn't belong in rap like R&B artists//17
ikid'll leave here wit more battle wounds than if i was in the army w/ scarred spits//18

oh my bad you said 10-15 linez
you can manage
lets get some votes
i was in the mood kid

yo i vote spittin on this one his punches flowed better
ripper you was tight it was close but spittin just had better punches

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keep em comin

yo i agree wit ice spitt was better it was a tight one tho

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need more votes