Battle:HellRaizor::.VS.::Punk'D (hit this and I will hit yours) (
 

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aight here we go


yo i guess you aint heard im one of the best at this, tryin to merk me in a battle will get you fired like tryin malpractice//comin against me you bound to lose from now on ya name should be screwed,cause all your gettin when challengin me//you winnin against me in a battle is like malcolm X catchin jungle fever: IT AINT HAPPENIN 'B'//next time you should think before you wanna commit lyricial suicide, cause all my rhmes do is punk you like rape victims before they die//i hope you've learned why im one of the best at this, cause my rhymes'll cripple you so much you'll need handicap access.

-1- holla back and good luck

I'll hit this up when 'ol boi drop. In the mean time

click on this link and vote on my battle with Lyricbrutalizer
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=44438

that was nice son check out my joint with streetlegend. i think its on page 2. just put in Lyricalmethod

ayo you aint the best at this, stop playin with yourself you need some practice/ you style is wacked, and ya sound like ya got crabs up yer ass crack/ so what in you seen the movie 8 mile, you sure as hell cant freestyle/ your gonna criple who? not even on your best day/ I am makin this shit up off the top of my head/ you found yours in the garbage writtin with lead/ shoulda left it there son, cuz pre-writtin shit aint no fun/you better call your mama and tell her to come and get you/ becuz I am gonna break you and shit on you to/

aight lets get them votes poppin so i can get my record updated nah mean -1-. lol i know i smoked this herb but its aight records need to be updated and since i know i won we can do it again if you want.

hey yo get them votes poppin before i have to merk someone in this joint aight, i wons this joint before but a poll wasnt made so i couldnt get my record updated

VOTE = HELLRAIZOR

REASON: Hell came harder...it wuzn't too much of a battle...Nuff said

Punk'D: Elevate a lil...ur battlin ppl outta ur league (no offense)

Ok.hell raizor now vote on my battle
i'll drop a poll vote herre in a min

this wasn't an amazing battle but my viote goes to hell raizor...
cuz he just had better rhymes and disses..
yo,, both of u should press enter after each line.. looks cleaner and its easier to read...
well .. im out..
vote =hell raizor..

yo hit mine vs. Nigma.. (poll vote)

yea i think hellrazior got dis, but theres one thing u two gotta do wit ya verses

dont put them in paragraph form, it makes them harder to understand, but i think hellraizor got this

his verse stood out more the punk'd kid shit was ok, but it wasnt as good as hellraizor's but look into wat i said, u'll get betta responses

~1~

yo both aight verses here peeps,but i was feelin hellraizers more,i read both like twice and afterwords jus knew that hellraizer took tha win,
So Poll Vote = hellrizer.

both of ya shit was good but hellraizor's was better cause he came harder and punk'd need to elavate lil more....and also what the other nigga said dont put them in paragraph form it is harder to read........do me the favor of checkin out my battle wit franchise21 and dont forget to poll .....aight one holla back

ill hit this vote shit up if u hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=45116

both of u need to work on ur bar phrasing and word structure its kinda hard to throw a good punch when its in paragraph form lol

vote hellraisor

punk'd work on intergratin ur diss together instead of jus throwin random shit out there garunteed ya shit will hit harder

'gone'

yo i appreciate the votes but i need two more so i can close this battle 8 people voted but only 3 poll votes actually counted do me that favor and poll vote please