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Shadow God vs. Blunt
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10 Lines min – 30 lines max Check in: Thursday Verses by: Saturday Voting is all done by poll now! Good luck |
Checkin in..
It's crazy it has to go down like this, Blunt. Keep it real though. G H O S T. |
what up yo.. .holla... good luck..
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beat= Love me.. Eminem/ 50cent
lyrically you equal to Mc square.. it's all relative.// whether you get beat here, or get beat there, this not a challenge bitch.// your only skill's embellishment, lyin' on wax, that's why you dyin' on wax.// dyin' on tracks like tha shelby train disaster, have relatives cryin' on that.// I'm the ultimate power, lyin' "god's" back, that's why you under tha soil.// flesh rotted and spoiled, bones disinagrating like cotten on the boil.// venemous beast like a king cobra, I'm the mongoose, your reign's ova.// you not even on, and you've fallen off faster than J-hova.// just a play-soulja, like GI-Joe but weaker than plastic.// more of a match stick, light you up and break you like that kid.// you can't be a god, I create the light which--> in-turn brings you outta tha shadows.// not like it matters, you better off in the dark hiding your rap-words.// writing shit backwards, start with a diss and hit ya-self with the punch.// when my cypher hits you out to lunch, breakfast and brunch.// fuck it, dinner the whole next week followed by a month.// I could even swallow my own toung and still bring better shit to the table than this guy does.// he's un-able to spit like us, we spit like gods.. he just stole our title like copy-write infringment laws.// you know I got the win, whatever you write'll just piss me off... click.. I'm off.. |
Nice spit..
Here's mine. -Blunt's reputation of being funny wit hard punches thrown? -Shadow'll take out both by amputating your humerus bone. Blunt MC take 7 days to write-a-verse, that's why you're WEAK(week). -Ya like Nikes-in-reverse... just can't do it, cuz Shadow take out ya FEET. -Go freepost-for-another-league - just leave...ya rhymes im about to seige. -You eat toast-wit-mead - cuz ye been burnt and drink out of shame of defeat. -You couldn't "rap" if you were saran...ya verse is a DEADLY DISASTER. -Power is corruption, La Familia wack, So gangstas bout to move in and blast ya harder than Nasa. -Ya crew already down hurt... I spit-lyrical-scythes and hit-"supreme"-medical-sites. -Better get-ya-head-on-right cuz ya mentals fret-at-a-dragon-sight. -You ain't a king....like kinko's paper - You're-just-PRINTS(prince). -Ya bout to be fucked more than old men who make whore-appoint-ments. -Ya rhymes more VILE (vile) than sets-of-containters. -Ya spits more on lock than if you were to get-retainers. -Its a no brainer...like broken glasses i shook ya frame. -Ya' raps all over the place, not even Siegfriend and Roy could tame. Murda... Blunt-MC-is-like-math-blaster-cuz-Shadow-do-numbers-on-him. I kill ya backers-faster-than-sack~ing-linebackers-kill-wack-QBs-on-a-wim. |
Umm, No votes?
Where everyone at? Voting should have commenced a while ago. Let's get this closed. G H O S T. |
Ok i'm a break down in lazy man terms lol.
Wordplay=tie Punches=shadow Meta's=shadow Multi's=no one unless i missed somethin Creativity=shadow more imagery too Overall=SHADOW |
i was feelin shadows punches the whole time while blunts seemed a little general.....
vote = shadow |
a'ight.. keep 'em comin'...
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Blunt MC take 7 days to write-a-verse, that's why you're WEAK(week).
^^Didn't 50 cent say that??........................................ .................................................. ............ .............................................. Vote=Shadow.. Better Verse. |
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Your thread is closed, dun.
You could vote on this one though. I need this closed. Been open too long. G H O S T. |
This was Blunts tightest line:
more of a match stick, light you up and break you like that kid.// This was Shadow's tightest line" Ya spits more on lock than if you were to get-retainers. Sorry fellas, both flows were week. I like Blunts more by comparison simply because he didn't use the word 'you' like 20 times. Too much repetition and redundancy kills a flow, I think. Granted, both 'o yawl are better than Jamie K. Blunt gets the nod for swallowing his own tongue vote=BluntMC |
that's all good, but it wasn't polled
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We need votes in here.
One more could be a KO. If not let's keep it going. Stop the sleeping. G H O S T. |
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