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illspitta4life vs Tonya~Montana
aite check in ya know the rules...
barz:unlimited voting: no hate, d/r first to 5 3-0 is KO 24 hours after ya check in |
waitin on ya Tonya~Montana..................................... .................................................. .......
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hey I'll vote for this if ya vote on my shit..................
DarkForce vs. Steve Wanksta .................................................. ................ |
check check!!!24hrs......thats enuff time for a nicca to write a book!!!! .................................................. ..
and unlimited barz......no one gonna wan read a book!!:mad: |
aite ill post mine first lets get this shit goin
Got more questions than answers, like the Riddler who is this kid facin me, thinkin hes an emcee killer? Life dealt me good looks and the ability to think on command think devastating rhymes that'll burn the mic when it touches your hand with flame it burns passionately, like the glowing yellow sun bright as day, it's 9:45PM, but a new day has already begun Prepare for the beginning of the end for you, lyricalmafia It's time I brought back the peace like they doin in Bosnia You're a nuisance, a disturbance, the mosquito that's too quick to kill but fuck it, just keep on spittin till your brain can't take its fill Overkills, leakin like ya got a plumbin problem, hand me the Drano Fixed up again, flow's unstoppable, you could never stop me, though I think I kind of OD'd on the last spit, it was only the first round I was bored, the battle was made, so I just looked around and found a kid spittin at me, swearing it was freestyle and not pre-written not bitten, he swears he aint shittin, but im calm like I just took Ritalin ADD Ive got against cats who cant interest me Im as infectious as SARS if ya cant resist me spits are quicker than a young cat's reflexes it perplexes your mind and reaches its climax as I connect this connectin each line with supreme organization flowin better and tighter than a famous orchestration listen to the wood-winds, the brass, the piccolos are my favorite they blow your mind like a bomb squad fuckin around and screamed "YOU'RE IT!" But you're my target, and don't take me for a fool I'm beyond cruel, I'm on a throne and make da devil sit on a stool You sit on a high-chair, still too young to take what I'm giving dyin like a bitch chokin on five niggas' cum, the dick-addicted chicken No, you ain't chicken, you go against anyone at anytime day or night, you make sure not to waste anyone's time You try your best, and the best from you is all I ask if I see another pre-written shit, your ass is grass broken like glass as I crash your mind like a bad accident my shit's indestructible, yo spit didnt even make-a-dent Oh, shit, where'd that come from? from the deepest reaches of my soul my heart burns like napalm, a fire the biggest hydrant couldnt control Hydrate your mind with knowledge that you've been defeated for every mistake made, a lesson learned... your daily dose of Illspitta undefeated k post ures as quick as possible..... |
spit it soon......................stupid 100 cahracter thing......we gotta change that to 50 characters................................~1~
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IIGHT.....
it's like the Battle of the SEXES but this CUNT-IS-MINE// I'll
Confused the FORUMS cause you gettin BITCHSLAPPED on the FRONTLINES:eek: // illspitta4life who came up with that Ploy// my rhymes OVER SHADOW you and got da CLIPSE sayin WHAT-HAPPEN-TO-THAT-BOY// I spit PUNCH AFTA PUNCH until it's FISTED & POUND// While your rhymes are SHIT like CORNROLLS all TWISTED & BROWN// Claiming you FLIPPIN rhymes those more like CARTWHEELS// get to the POINT you will be De FEATED check the DART-ON-YA-HEELS// you 1-3 now but turn 1-4 afta you Face Me// for a Mc ya rhymes are GRADe D's like TRACEY// Let this loss SINK in like that COUCH from AL's BUNDY'S BUTT// yea you SPIT OUT alotta BARS{dick} cause AH MAN {ALMOND} you just en'JOY'ing the NUTS{get it}// you come with a SWITCH STYLE thinkin it's HOT but yet you still Simmer// The only way you could SEE Me is if I put TWO HOLES in ya HEAD like a CLAN MEMBER// illspitta4life afta this battle make notes and Change-That-Plan// Ask bout your CHICKEN-as-Crew I'm like MAN-DEY-RAN{MANDARIN}{get it}// I'ma murder you with one Bar on my STYLE SWITCH// all your rhymes you spit are TALES{TELLS} like a CHILD SNITCH//:kid: ........................i'm out |
your rhymes sayin I'ma He?? I'ma Female!!!!! ha ha talk bout your prewrittens!! ha ha whew!!.........................................
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my bad dam girl i always fight guys, sry if i offended. aight uppin for votes on this joint....lets get it goin.......
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Aight......LOL ILLSPITTA damn .....is a She dawg.....lol
But this wun has to go to Tonya...because she had better punches....sorry fam.......But she had you on this |
show sum love yall and vote ............ I DO.............................FOR YALL.............................................. ...LETS GO TO THE POLLS!!:o
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yea dog she do got a point lol
but let me break it down, dis was a fuckin nice ass battle, both verses were tight, and they both picked up where da otha verse lacked in dat area on illspitta shit, he had some fuckin nice lines, but there wasnt that many punches thrown, he had a couple, but he could have added more, but on flow and vocab, he took da cake, his verse read nice and there were some rare words throughout his verse and tonya, she had a verse full of punches, and some really good ones, they were pretty tight and she didnt have any of dat played out shit in her verse, hers was o natural lol, and da wordplay was a definite, good shit all around, da only reason i peeped dis battle is cause im coo wit both of u and i wanted to peep some competition, u both came hard in ya own ways, and too both of u keep up da good work vote=illspitta |
illspitta had tha longest most annoying verse ive ever seen
unlimited bars?? skill comes in quality not quantity .....bitchslapped on frontlines........lol ^^tonya killed u (illspitta its a nice verse but seems like more of a good song not a good battle) 'gone' please peep http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=49131 |
yo nice shit from both of u but ima break it down like tis
flow= tie punches= tonya multies= tie personals= tie vocab= tie overall tonya |
my vote goes to Tonya as well...Ma u came ill wit it, props givin to ya along wit my vote.............................................. ..........................
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