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Manic Killer VS Violent~Wordz
aight ima spit now
10-16 lines no crew votes no h8 votes EXPLAIN your votes plz lets get the shit on |
oi MANIC VOTE ON THIS THEN ILL VOTE ON YOURS PEACE
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i spit shit rapidly aptly shatterin cats name-ely-you//
i go beyond hurtin-ya and brutally murder yo-and-yo-family-too// my wickedly ill spill drop tops the top of the list of 'what's hot'// u also toppin a list but its the one labelled 'what's not'// callin thisa battle is an overestimation - return to masturbation, cos i aint lettin-u-off// rumours that ur mutha is gettin-u-off, is that shit honestly true? course not - cos even she rejected u// words violent? i leave u silent, whilst i sit smilin// organisin ur funeral, i have u dumped in a toilet - and im makin in communal// so every cat can take-a-piss-on-you, and dump - like i dump-this-diss-on-you// u a pittiful pretender, that i render - defenceless, this battles on false pretences// i was told u had a little talent, see? manic is a soldier marchin gallant-lee// u an inadequate opponent, from day 1 ive known-it// this is my win right here, no fear, sheer -// terror i spread, with a bullet to ur head// thats it im done, so turn yo bitch ass round and mothafukin RUN// |
aight dude spit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..
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wheres the spit out dawg. c'mon out from behind the wall............................................
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>>Didn't Know you set it Up Today<Ti'll I read you Pm<Thought we was Gone do This Yesterday<<? :But ne Ways:
::Aiiight Though:: ::Rippage Time:: He prolly get Rape by 'Mics', : oh-remember: 'Michael Jackson', the reason you Lose(loose)-Spitten.. And I'll put '2 Mics' on ya, 'Tyson, and Jordan', still your Shotz want be Hard-Hitten..// This 'Retard'-Forgetten, you just 'Special', while ya Skill-Level, just 'Slow'ly-Develops.. Poorly-Develop, put a '32' to your Doom, and watch this 'Salt'y 'Man', Sourly-En-velope..// ::Yep::Yep::Yep:: ::Uh-Huh:: Every Man-I-C, I Kill-em, Victimize-Em, and Fill-em, with mo-Lines, than a Stitchen-Penicil.. Manic, Beat-em, and Eat-em, this nicca couldn't Beat shit up with, a Kitchen-Utensil..// ::Direct:: This shits Suspenseful, how the Fuck you gone have Two-hands, and not throw a Single-Punch-Line.. 1~3? Flyweight?, :Nicca Plz: you just Garbage, :Fuk: you a Waste of Mind..// :Let Me Filler This: you a Loser, a Failur, put your Legs on you Verse you still Fail… Your Punches resemble your Vocabulary,:Agrees: you just Miss-Spell…// ::Knock Out:: I Spit verbally-murder, call me The Manic-Killer, You Skitzo-Frantic, So you Loosing Control of this, like that Panic-Thriller… You a Faulker like Ben Stiller, :Yep and: This just an KO, like Kobe did to Reggie Miller…// :: Don’t Sway:: Only way you can Win this, if you Go to Somebody Thread and Ask "Will you Vote for Me I'll Vote For You"… But your Date-is-Due, no Mattah, who votes, in This Battle, they want Vote-For-You…// I shouldnt Have to Explain, nething, i think all my shit is Clear..but if you Say you dont Understand nething dont Vote ok ____________________ ~There 7 Bars = 14 Lines~ you Might say Its more..but its not its how I Typed it..~There just longer Lines~ |
Back to the top..
If i had..100 post i'll vote... but i dont.. <<But i'll start Freeposten More Today..to get 100<< ::D:: ~::1+0::~ |
Ok Ok Ok ::Hmph::
Some Body Vote:: Plz |
::Really:: Srry for the Continous Openz:: But Ya Know::
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maniac killa put a little too much filler in some sentences giving it bad flow. Come vote on LowRolla and Herbivore and we'll hit you back at 100 posts.
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i felt manic's flow, and manic threw better lines. the whats hot/whats not line was a killer. violent, dont put that "uh, uh, yeah, yeah" shit in there. it fucks up your flow bad
VOTE ---> manic someone poll me up at http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=50616 |
Manic took this with better flow and better punches.............didn't find it that close........regardless keep both ya headz up..........peace
Vote = Manic Return the favor on these Syke vs. Envisionz Syke vs. vaccine t Syke vs. Blac Haze Syke vs. Ace of Spades |
I think this was close no matter what anyone says...
Violent had some nice wordplay I Spit verbally-murder, call me The Manic-Killer, You Skitzo-Frantic, So you Loosing Control of this, like that Panic-Thriller… You a Faulker like Ben Stiller, :Yep and: This just an KO, like Kobe did to Reggie Miller…// Fuck dat was a ill line... But killer i think came around harder at first...It was close i'm going by a pubic hair on dis... my wickedly ill spill drop tops the top of the list of 'what's hot'// u also toppin a list but its the one labelled 'what's not'// so every cat can take-a-piss-on-you, and dump - like i dump-this-diss-on-you// These lines took me in..Both had great wordplay, punches where felt from both... By a mm i vote killer for slighty more punch.. But no disrespect to any of yas,,,fucken both where ill in my eyes... Peep my shit against Zainy would be much respected.. |
vote=violent
better punches n shit ____________________ ++++++++++++++++++ \ ____________________ / |
UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ONLY NEED TWO MO VOTES TO MERK THIS DUDE................!
UPPIN! YO VOTE WILL BE RETURNED! PM ME, OR POST WITH A LINK i am true to my word ((((<<FOR MORONS: I callin an honest vote for an honest vote, if u hit up violent on this poll. then i will still hit up urs honest. I will think u are blind & stupid, but i aint cheatin here>>)))) |
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