FaTaL AcTiOnS vs. Deamr1
 

you know the rules

i'm here
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12 lines max dogg

check it,
This kids crap, Deamr1 could "swallow Reynolds" and still couldn't "spit rap(wrap)"/
Inexperienced fag got 17 posts and 10 came from Bitch Slapped/
Get mids snapped in minutes, send this "monkey" back into his "primal image/"
thinkin you can rhyme? forget it, you "wouldn't be on top" if you "stood behind a midget"/
Deamr1 will die relentless, no need for spittin I'll soon retire this newbie writer/
Tryin to prove he's tighter? I'll beat Deamr1 "five to zero" like "QB Snyper"/
D yellin "I knew he's hyper", but before this drag queer drops his last tear/
I'll pull a verse outta the bag and leave his record lookin like "last year(02)"/
Now Deamr1 checkin my database, found I'm outta this world like outer space/
Battled me, I left this freckle face waste wit his nose outta place/
No matter what route you take, I'll still crack the spleen of weak rappers who actin mean/
And wack emcees who couldn't "get the crowd to jump" if they "stood on trampolines"/

OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



You no-show, I guarentee I get my win!

I have "feeble actions" runnin back to rehearsal
pleadin "gimme a break" like a fuckin kit-kat commercial
every "action" you take against me is "fatal" bitch trust me
just because I'm nuts you fuckin thought you could bust me
you got two little wins trick but double the losses
plus you got such a thin dick that it's literally flossin'
have you workin out with "danger" signs to exercise caution
oh -your flow? so-so
if anything, that's the reason it's "no-show"
your script is like a dry tampax - cause it's got no-flow
you call yourself the "knockout king" makin me laugh
you must play too much nintendo cuz you ain't shit in rap

uppin for votes

POLL VOTES THAT IS!
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D yellin "I knew he's hyper", but before this drag queer drops his last tear/
I'll pull a verse outta the bag and leave his record lookin like "last year(02)"/
that was the killer but the QB SYPER part didn't make sense because you havent beat him but if the Newbie would have came hard like he did with the first few lines in the end then he would have won

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whatsup no one voting or what?? When I have 100 posts Ill be votin mf's!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin for votes again
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Aight nice battle.

but I gotta go TKO on this one

Punches:Fatal
Flow:Fatal
Structure:Fatal
Wordplay:Fatal

this nigga fatal just eatin Emcees today, lol.

nice battle on both your parts tho

can yall poll vote this shiat up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=50271

peace

good verses from both of ya but ima give it to Dreamr..
"you got two little wins trick but double the losses
plus you got such a thin dick that it's literally flossin' "

and otha sh!t caught my eye as well.good battle tho

Vote: Dreamr

Uppin for votes .................................................. .................................cmon someone just fuckin vote and end this shit

.................................................. .................................................. ................................................fa tal wins no explintation needed

.................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........................but for some reason it wont let me vote

since I'm a newbie, someone give me some help here - why can't anyone vote on this? What do I need to do?