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Deceit 06-01-03 10:11 PM

Deceit vs Noiz
 
15-20 lines, 5-0 KO, no hate votes, keep it quick and simple, i'll spit first

Noiz 06-01-03 10:15 PM

Aight Dawg Im Checkin In Spit Yo Shit

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Deceit 06-01-03 10:25 PM

I spit insane rhymes, it's presidential shit/1
Deceit gives hysterical lyrics to bust your Noizy lip/2
Politically incorrect, hipocritically speaking/3
Sick as a Nazi while your methods blaspheming/4
Your mother opened her legs and i was shocked by two things/5
She had a penis and so much hair, it looked like Don King/6
Your gettin' ripped but there's no need for apologies/7
The last time you had money you were playin' monopoly/8
Don't pass go, you stay in Jail/9
And you stay there to avoid my lyrical hotels/10
My flow bankrupts you when your lyrically bankrupted/11
Even your parents find you uneasy, you were probly adopted/12
Though your mums so ugly she got done for facial mooning/13
No one could give birth to someone so repulsive and losing/ 14
Your rhymes embarrassing, you show a new low level/15
I'ma rebel with a cause, without a cause you just a rebel/16
Your mothers such a fucking whore, she invented AIDS/17
So you went to your other option, turned to gays/18
And every word you utter is nearing your last feat/19
Your last word was my beginning and you said 'Deceit'/20

Deceit 06-01-03 10:26 PM

Done, good luck Noiz, sorry, took kinda long, had another battle to finish off, go ahead dogg.............................................. ....

Noiz 06-01-03 10:30 PM

Sinking To Your Level Really Quick

Deceit, The Word Known Now For A "Modern-Meaning" 1
The Act Of Deceiving, No Wonder Ceits Lyrics Are "Peeving" 2
They Aint Punching Hard, Your Deception Has "Turned-Around-Leaving" 3
Ungreatful Bastard, Be Happy And Feel Your Chest, "Cant-Believe-Your-Still-Breathing!?" 4

Picking Up Pace

Ceit If You Can't Relate To "ERrors" How Come You Can Relate To The E.R.?// 5
Bitch I'll Sedate You, The Patient, To Literally Lay Down A "Stall-Bar!"// 6

Explict Evidence (This Battle), Shows You Are "Dumb" To "Trip" Such A "Loud-Alarm!"// 7
But Even Then You Deny It When Your OWN HANDS Were Covered With The WET PAINT Of The "STOLEN CAR!"//8

Keep Misleading "Film-Stars", And The Inevitable Is Bound To Happen, There Is "No-Place-Like-Home" And You'll "Lose-Your-Way-Without-North-Star-Tracking"... 9
Your "Tracking" The Golden Brick Road 'Cause I Already Paved It, Don't Bothering Asking For Directions 'Cause Dorothy's House Got "Blown-Away" (lol) 10

Im Ripping This Kid Too Hard...I Gotta Chill...

This Flow Leaves All Your Cravings Content, Wrote This Under 10 Minutes And It's "Worplay-Is-Mint"...11
Your Fire Wasnt Really There (Guess It Deceived You) And Now Your Back On The Block "Lighting-Dryer-Lint"12
Refer To Your Name And I Still See It As No Threat, Even hough im Spitting Fire And Your Burning You lie To Say "No Sweat" 13 These Lyrics Attack In Identical Stacks, Packing Punches That Leaves Ceit Decived And On Lax 14
Last Line, Taking It Easy, Knew I Was Never Losing This Battle Cause Ceit Is "Bent" All Over The "Needy"




Aight Im done..Stummbled Through That One, Didnt Even Read It Yet

Deceit 06-01-03 10:34 PM

Good though, i liked it, the flow was stumbly as you said, but you took advantage, nice battle, this could be close...

Deceit 06-01-03 10:35 PM

Uppin' Fo' Votes, i hit 200 aswell, Noiz, you're a good lyricist, but i'm better, Nah fuckin' witcha, ha.
Uppin'......

Noiz 06-01-03 10:36 PM

yeah UppIng For Votes

Good Battles We Both Have THe Abillity TO Spit Quick, Pretty Even Too

Lets Get VOtes
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QB SNYPER 06-01-03 10:38 PM

damn noiz ripped this newbie out of his damn skin
i mean you've just been whore slapped
fuck bitched slapped

Noiz 06-01-03 10:41 PM

Aight Cool Upping For More Votes
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Deceit 06-01-03 10:42 PM

uppin', noiz, am i the newbie, i mean have you got more posts, just a new name?
Whatever, uppin', let's do this one quick........................

Deceit 06-01-03 10:44 PM

I generally thought i was really good, especially the last 2 lines, they were prophetic, mystical, am i just seein' what i want to?

Hmmm, forget the nicities, tell the complete truth noiz, what did you think of me?

Noiz 06-01-03 10:44 PM

yeah I Know I Think QB Just Gets A Little Mixed Up WHen He Sees Verses Lol Im THe Newbie Out Of You And Me But Oh Well, Who GIves A Fuck

Upping

Noiz 06-01-03 10:46 PM

Your Shit Was Aight...I Was Checkin On Your Other Battles...You Ripped Some People...I Think I Just Went A Little Further In Wordplay, The "Dumb" And Hearing And the ERRORS and ER Lines...Thats What Might Win This BAttle For Me..But One BAttle Aint Mean Shit Yo, DOnt Worry About IT SOmetimes You might Beat Me, Who Knows Its All Draw Cards Man

Deceit 06-01-03 10:47 PM

Ha, well whatever, i thought i was good, i guess that's all that matters, my dignity and honor, and of course the fact that i am a lyrical genius...
Ha, jus playin'

Uppin' fo votes........


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