Sureal (2-0) vs. TREACH P (2-1)
 

Check in's by Monday
Verses by Tuesday
Voting ends Thursday

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Topic...
Lonely Knight's

chckin in .... good look treach .... inter crew battle here dawg .....................................

good luck .....

-OnE-

RBTL....vs. TREACH P..... Topic : Lonely Knights...

.....Theory.....

So Many People In This World Fighting For Soul, Health, And Life...
Some Disagnosed With Diseases, Been Slashed With A Metaphorical Knife...
Children Recently Born, Don't Deserve To Be Defected Or Disabled...
When They Grow, Will have No Friends, And Will Always Be 'Labelled'...
People are People.No Real Differences Between Them In Soul or Spirit...
Try To Explain This To Young Children But they Just Wont 'Hear-It'...

.....The Life Of Strife.....

He's A Soldier... May Have Born 3 Weeks Early, And 5 Pounds Too Light...
But He Was The Strongest Person I Knew, No Sign Of Fear or Fright...
His Parents Love him too Much , Baby Him, He Can't Explore The World...
It's Time For Them To Release Him, All Of His Thoughts Are Now Unfurled...
Went To School, But Was Always Picked On, Just Because He Talked Differently...
He Is The Smartest In The Class, Couldnt Get Any Recognition, Incidentally...
His Best Friend, Was Full Of Love, Energy, Could Listen, But Never Speak...
For His Best Friend, Was Not A Human , It Was His Kitten That He Named 'Sneak'...
Throughout His Life, Has been Called Many Things, His Heart Is Strong...
For He Does Not Care What They Say, Because He Knows They Are All Wrong...

.....The Night.....

Then One Hellish Night...His 'Friends' Thought It Would Be a Funny Thing To Do...
His Parents had Warned him, But He Did Not Beleive, Thought His Friends Were True...
Because He Was Different, They Took Him To The Lot With Cruel Intentions...
He Thought They Had Accepted Him, But It Was Just a Un-Mentioned Dimension...
They Doused Him In Gasoline And Lit Him On Fire, He Was Left Burnt And Charred...
And Why Did This All Happen? Because He Was Different , as They Say a 'Retard'...

.....The After-Math.....
In The Hospital, Covered In Bandages, Tubes In And Out, Now On Life Support...
He Was Tired, And Weary, but Didnt Stop Fighting, Life Is His Last Resort...
He Had Forgiven The Guys For What They Did To Him, He Would never Fail...
Blind From The Intense Heat, Started a New Task Of Learning to Read Braille...
He's One Of The Strongest People You Will Ever Meet, Never Giving Up...
Never Going To Die In Heart, Not Below The Doctors Standards ,Always Living Up...

.....The End.....

Then One Shaky Morning To Nurse Came In To See That He had Lost His Fight...
As He Now Travelled Up To Heaven , As a Fighter , As a 'Lonely Knight'...


edited for grammar

Thats gunna be hard to beat man that was sad .................................................. ......................................
checkin the fuck in/.............................

ok treach , you told me that you would drop last night...

and if your verse is anything like mine in topic i will lost alot of respect for you...

cuz i originally flipped mine...

now drop as soon as you can...

Sureal, you almost braught a tear to my eye. Dawg, im speechless, I really think that this verse deserves legend. Im gonna see what I can do, but Treach needs to be amazing to beat you..

ok, i looked in sign outs and saw that TREACH P is now signed out... is that for next week, or for this week ...
because he said and i quote..



so im thinking it sounds like its for this week....
treach get back at me on this...
or mad man if you know...

That shit sent chills down my back, no kidding, that shit is the definition of dopeness, I shit you not. Hey Sand, you could learn a thing or two from this kid. lol. Great drop Blaze, we'll see if TREACH shows up to match that.

its for next week dogg not now,
i got the shit written down might be half as good as that, but ill make sure i post but my shit wont have half as much heart as that, peace

that ws madd ill Sureal..............yo treach p 1 question........
how come u got a pic of a black man with a gun when u urself arent black............................................. ....

i'm a wait till treach drops his verse...............................

then i'll vote

you 2 have had black man pics and you aint black lollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll so dont say shittttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt tttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt ttt

kay this cat took it but ima sttill post my verse
This like 3 different war stories each kick off from the one before it,

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The knight had dreamed of it ever sice he became a page,
This is what he really wanted, thought fuck the minimum wage,
For the first time in his life he was about to go into combat,
2 Enemys facing each other,archers shot,knights held back,
The captain signalled for the archers to fire than to attack,
The yung knight ran into battle swished his sword around wildly,
his horse was hit with an arrow fell down looked into his eyes mildly,
He watched and saw some of his best friends many of them died,
He jumped onto the ground pretended to be dead silently he lied,
He was the only one left looked scared and lonely in his blood pool,(kicks off new story)
Simpson looked up form the dead body he had tripped on and loaded another body onto the mewl,
Some of the other battle seargeons looked on him as courageous,
Some thought his braveness was triggered by psycotic behaviour,
Next time he went in he was shot asked whether he was allight and he lied,
ANother time he went in he was shot again he refused to die, another man cried:(new story kicks off)
Help me cried the lonely 6 year old little boy,
Amongst the rubble he reached for his smouldering toy,
It was on the edge of a forest in the war torn vietnam,
The boys skin was was slowly peelin off from the napalm,
He didnt know why his parents were layin dead next to him,
He would never never find out why his skin was dripping from his burning limb,
Three men died ever so lonely,theyll never be knighted thogh they desever to be
yep i no whasent as good as his and strayed a hell lot from the topic my last rb tl battle anyway


PEACE

That was a good verse Treach, but let me just tell you a little bit of side information. In the time that it took for you to write your verse Sureal's made it into RB Legend's. Sureal you took this from beginning to end, and you almost brought a tear to my eye. Sand said it best though, flow needed a little work. But hey, no ones perfect. Dope drop, maximum dopeness, need some dope (lol). Sureal Wins!

Vote=Sureal

i don't know about all that legends shit....but yeah....he did definately take this.............................................. ...vote=surreal

^^^^^Good explained....................

Vote=Sureal