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Raz Vs TheCurse
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No dickrydin ect......Votes 10lines min and max Post asap................ |
okay well damn heres some quik shit...........
dude tha only curse u have is tha curse of no skill// and accepting tha battle call, damn did u take an exstacy pill// when u read this u better swallow my barz not bite them// only way u got the 'nuts' to battle me is from a 'flight din'// flight dinner - peanuts.... i'll come through ya screen like 'joe budden', and i'll 'pump' ya chest 'up'// bitch my bullets will soak u, till tha point u doin tha breast stroke// i would let my 'word's 'play' wit u, but it don't like wack emcee's// so insted it goin against u, it left a message suck Raz's Testies// dawg this is a sayonce(spellin) one more step to get rid of this curse// u been 'Raz'ledazzled and dissed like christina wit fred durst// |
aight kid.............yo turn..............
lets make this shit hot..................... i'll pm u to let u know.................. |
dawg 10 barz takes u over 20 minutes.....that means u spend a lil more than 2 minutes on each bar......common man i did mine in a couple of minutes, this was spose to be a quik battle
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yo i'm a battle dis bitch who "MERKS FOR FUN", probably JERKS HIS SON, cant out spit me cause i'll "CURSE" YOUR TONGUE//
seen me comin' so he TURNED TO RUN, this bitch probably uses his tongue to CHURN HIS CUM// this guy could "throw a lit match" and still not "drop somethin' HOT", couldn't "COCK A GLOCK" if he was chedda BOB//(get it?) my rhymes are OFF THE TOP, yours go from some paper to the reply BOX// its like dis cat is tryin' to climb a hill thats to STEEP, he gets all his rhymes because he CHEATS when he battles for KEEPS// my rhymes are hot and he cant TAKE THE HEAT, sits in an "icebox" so he can SHAKE DEFEAT// he quoted himself but he mispelled ORIGINAL, this battle is "pointless" like a broken PENCIL// i'm rapin' a virgin to the game so i'm SINFUL, i'll spit a few wack lines so i can keep dis battle SUSPENSFUL// this last bar gonna be used to FINISH 'EM, its like i took all your words and simply DIMINISHED 'EM// i'll be "reversing your words" and "RE-SENDING 'EM", now you hittin' yourself, so i'll thank you when i'm WINNIN'// ++++++++++++++++explanations+++++++++++++++++ ---chedda bob from 8 mile, shot his cock, so "cock the glock" yeah ----off the top of my head, and im sayin' he prewrites ----cheats when he battles for keeps, means he gets his rhymes from other people and battles for the rights to use a verse, ask if you dont understand -----my rhymes are hot, he sits in an icebox to cool off, and "shake" as in shivering and also as in shakin' somethin off sorry it took so long, i had to disconnect so i could use da phone real quick, and i also had to restart once cause i hit ENTER and it submitted and it was under 100 characters so my bad, nice verse btw, UPPIN FO VOTES |
---chedda bob from 8 mile, shot his cock, so "cock the glock" yeah
damn another 8mile reference.....shit eminem is one of my favs but common ppl be oridginal......... neways good battle,....... Uppin for Votes.......... |
UPPIN .................... COMMON PPL U CAN UP YA POST NUMBER BY VOTING......AND POLL VOTING...............VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE
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i'm typing a lot of things so i can get over 100 characters
UPPIN UPPIN UPPIN UPPIN UPPIN FOR VOTES, ITS HARDER GETTING VOTES HERE THAN IT IS AT D12WORLD. AND THATS PRETTY BAD |
COME ON LETS GET THIS SHIT HOPIN, LETS GET THIS SHIT GOIN...............UPPIN THIS SHIT........................
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uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin
ok that should gimme something close to 100 characters |
Poll this shit we haven't even got one muhfuckin vote.....hell if it comes down to it curse will suck yo dick...lmfao just playin but foreal, vote on this shit
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yo fo real i WONT suck ya dicks, lol, but c'mon uppin dis shit. this is seriously worse than d12 when it comes to gettin' votes and that is VERY bad.
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goddamn, do battles normally take this long?
UPPIN |
Both verses were aight, raz had better flow to his, but curses punches were more on point, and punches r what count, so going with curse
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my vote goes to TheCurse, he had a wayy better verse, better punches, better flo, better wordplay, better stucture, overall better rhyme
vote=TheCurse |
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