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RIPallthat VS Divine Creature
10 - 15 lines
no feeding 1 round you spit first dawg |
Okay....CheckN in .................................................. .................................................. ..................
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I'm spit this double feature in the theater after I pull blood from this "creature"//
InjectN ya wit needles in the bleachers is the riddle that will defeat ya// Ya couldnt get a win if ya attached an undefeated record to ya text// I rip ya set-with-a-single-claw and place a bet-like-a-final-call that unstoppable when I shock ya to ya draws// I stay quick on the ball...You a dick that slow at the draw...ShootN blanks at this call// I'll slam you into a glass wall....Shatter a piece to stop ya shield N cast ya fall// I'll knock ya from south paw...Stop ya mouthN off cause this ya struggle aint nothN// I'll spit ya teeth in half...Backwards dash into ya bash yourself on a mat from the fact ya wak and NothN// Ya act is buggN....I tie a gas mask to your lyrics and begin to nuke ya flow.... It incredible how much edible dick this rapper sucks...Ya rap like a hoe that has a cock embedded in her bone// |
::aiight check it::
Watch me as I Rip “ RIPallthat ” slit his wrists with spit on tracks/ I’ll knock him across this earth with a quick hit then spin him back/ I’m liftin this kat so high he’s playin with mach-jets-in-motion/ RIPallthat couldn’t battle he plays a lot with cocks-wet-n-lotions/ You talk a lot but cant seem to walk cause I leave you frozen/ I cleave your body parts open then freeze tha whole thing/ You hoping Im not that I’ll, but now u know Im a dope king/ Sit on my thrown while I smoke an O’ and blow an O ring/ I torture you with matters deadly like the old Chinese republic/ My audience loves it, when I battle my fine speech erupts kids/ RIP throws more Tricks than a dog-doin-back-flips, you try to surpass this? I run so far ahead you'de have to jog-movin-fast-kid! Leave you confused like retards doing taxes/I give you hoes jaw practice when I cum hard like hoes on my mattress/Dawg u aint bring one remark that’s smart-verbal-calvalry/ So watch as I spark tha heat like a charged-thermol-battery/ |
some votes please!........................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....
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some votes please!........................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....
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aiight this battle looks like it was written on some other program...pre-writing...but it doesn't say not to in the rules so WHATEVA...here' the breakdown
Streetlegend takes it by a touch in all catergorys...wordplay, vocab, punches but the flow seemed smooth from both...1... vote=streetlegend(close battle) |
MA BAD...wtf am i on...wait don't answer that...sorry i must of got you RIPALLTHAT confused wit streetlegend for the way you name typed up...sorry... anaylsis still counts but on ripallthat...1...
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uppin this...can we get some accurate votes up in here??............................................ ........................
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uppin this.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .........
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this wasnt really a good battle but this is the breakdown
personals-divine punches-divine flo-divine vote=divine |
devine creature gets my vote, good flow and better word play, rip all this was good harder punches.
I vote devine creature!!! Can you guys go vote on my battles fair so I can get them out the way and battle again!!! |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62812 yo vote no show on this battle and I'll hit this back
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up for some votes............................................. .................................................. .......
As soon as I get enough posts, I will vote on other ppls battles |
Hmm tough one,
im thinkin rip all dat just got dis, better flow n structure plus i digged his punches more Sum fair votes is needed on dis piece anyone readin dis http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6068#post606068 Peace |
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