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XL4REAL vs COMPLEX MANTHRAX
10 lines max
you spit first no editing your post |
Ok dude here we go!!!!!! UK!!!!!!!!
checkin in i'll spit after ya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
I SPAT FIRST but this kid spat 20 lines instead of 10 so i repeated my verse below and added 10 lines to make it fair,,, read mine first to keep it fair for him also... peace
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I spit against you with your own elements//
I'll crush your style like 100 elephants. Thunder, lightning, rain and showers// I'll use them against you until your pushing up flowers. I heard in your into weird shit your talking kicks in your messages// I heard you a freak smelling shoes for fetishes. Well you gave me that line when shell toes you be talking// I'll shove my size 12 so far up ur ass in your mouth i'll be walking. You think your complex, na your simple// I'll squeeze your brain through your eyes like im squeezing a pimple. You couldnt absorb my skill, you gonna get beat up manthrax// Cuz your about to get bloody soak it up like a tampax. I twist your set up back around against you// You so dumb you dont realise that I just dissed you. I heard you got mad dirty s.t.d.'s// After all manthrax your half a disease. (manthrax = man + anthrax) The other half (man) you think you can be// Never, cuz you replaced your dick with a pussy. Your rhymes are fake as shit like silicone tits// Now you've digested my style its given you the shits. |
you went TWICE OVER THE LIMIT erase half your verse and i'll not call for a DQ................................................ ........its 10 line limit 5 bars
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I'LL SPIT AGAIN WITH AN ADDED 10 LINES SEEING AS YOU SPIT 20 AND THE LIMIT WAS 10
I come armed-with-berrettas to harm-the-trendsetters/// I slap down your lyrics put my palm-to-your-letters/// Ya pits-stink, ya-spits-stink, its instinct ya mad-at-me/// You write like the Bee Gees and your flows a fuckin ‘Tradegy’/// I spit quick sporadically; MK fatality/// To want to battle COM ain’t dumb its insanity/// The only grip you got on this battle is on ya shell-toes/// That post is more of a waste (waist) then where my fucking belt-goes/// I can’t write with pens I’m so hot the fucking felt-glows/// I’ll melt-those shell-toes turn them into sneaks with velcro/// My spits so thick its get stuck-in-tissue/// This punch line could miss and still fucking-hit-you/// I corrode-you-with-chemicals coz your ode-was-so-terrible/// I wipe the smile of your crew; leave you solo-hysterical/// You mean-to-cuss-me? need speed-to-rush-me/// You won’t like me when I’m mad; I turn green-and-muscley/// I’ll slaughter ya-order and kidnap ya-daughter/// You could have her back for one night but you still can’t afford-her/// |
wot you on about mate? youve got 12 lines in there too?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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YOU HAVE WRIT 20 LINES, there are two lines then a space then two lines then a space and so on, i only wrote ten so i write ANOTHER ten to be even with YOU
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good battle and close battle on both ya parts
Xl4real had a good finisher, but Complex was more consistant complex had good multis and wordplay and what I think is important, better vocab by the way, Xl4real, that half man half anthrax shit had me laughin, good shit, but Com still won vote=Complex Manthrax check out my battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=63437 |
thanx dawg much appreciated, uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....
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Good battle you two. I just started postin so i cant vote yet but i think complex got this one his flow was dead on. Xl4 had some good punch lines but the flow was a bit off. Great battle
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THIS IS A HARD DECISION, BOTH VERSES WERE GOOD, PRETTY GOOD PUNCHES BUT MANTHRAX FELL OFF AT THE END AND EXCLUDING XL'S LINE LIMIT I THINK HE TOOK THIS BATTLE
MAYBE IF BOTH VERSES WERE EVEN IT WOULD HAVE MADE A BETTER DIFFERENCE FOR COMPLEX VOTE-XL |
This was a very close battle. But I'ma have to give it to the man with the better punches.......XL4real. A good majority of his punches were funny as hell, while Complex your punches flowed well but they just didn't seem to connect as hard.
Vote = XL |
thanks for tha props............................................. ......................... just uppin for votes yall..................ICEBERG420 u didnt poll vote son...........................peace!!!!!!!!!!!
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complex....
I come armed-with-berrettas to harm-the-trendsetters/// I slap down your lyrics put my palm-to-your-letters/// that's a good ass start.... Ya pits-stink, ya-spits-stink, its instinct ya mad-at-me/// You write like the Bee Gees and your flows a fuckin ‘Tradegy’/// meh, that's alright I guess I spit quick sporadically; MK fatality/// To want to battle COM ain’t dumb its insanity/// ok The only grip you got on this battle is on ya shell-toes/// That post is more of a waste (waist) then where my fucking belt-goes/// I can’t write with pens I’m so hot the fucking felt-glows/// I’ll melt-those shell-toes turn them into sneaks with velcro/// My spits so thick its get stuck-in-tissue/// This punch line could miss and still fucking-hit-you/// I corrode-you-with-chemicals coz your ode-was-so-terrible/// I wipe the smile of your crew; leave you solo-hysterical/// You mean-to-cuss-me? need speed-to-rush-me/// You won’t like me when I’m mad; I turn green-and-muscley/// I’ll slaughter ya-order and kidnap ya-daughter/// You could have her back for one night but you still can’t afford-her/// the rest was ok, the whole verse was alright but not great now XL.... I spit against you with your own elements// I'll crush your style like 100 elephants. complex's open was better Thunder, lightning, rain and showers// I'll use them against you until your pushing up flowers. that wasn't too shabby, I kind a liked it I heard in your into weird shit your talking kicks in your messages// I heard you a freak smelling shoes for fetishes. that's just silly Well you gave me that line when shell toes you be talking// I'll shove my size 12 so far up ur ass in your mouth i'll be walking. haha, that's funny You think your complex, na your simple// I'll squeeze your brain through your eyes like im squeezing a pimple. You couldnt absorb my skill, you gonna get beat up manthrax// Cuz your about to get bloody soak it up like a tampax. good stuff good stuff I twist your set up back around against you// You so dumb you dont realise that I just dissed you. I heard you got mad dirty s.t.d.'s// After all manthrax your half a disease. (manthrax = man + anthrax) I think this dudes winnin, let's see.... The other half (man) you think you can be// Never, cuz you replaced your dick with a pussy. Your rhymes are fake as shit like silicone tits// Now you've digested my style its given you the shits. ok, both these dudes verses were alright, they both had some good lines in their stuff, I liked complex's start, but I liked XL's whole verse better than complex's vote: XL bye |
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