Ozone Vs. Yung iLL Will
 

I will spit first

no limit on lines

no crew votes no hatin

pls explain votes


i will drop soon

dont need no introduction in dis
dont need a introduction to diss
im here now

The essence of my presence delivers depression in your direction
watch me blaze this fool in a single rap session
not to mention
your inferior rhymes is because of your interior mind
how you going to write a whole paragraph with only 2 hot lines
no exta credit but you get points for trying
I'll beat this KID until his speach is slurred
with adjective, bars and verse by verse
this is my spot, your evicted, and kicked to the curb
he thought he was hot, like Michael Vick did, practice is what I prefer
my tactics are for you to get ripped by my words
my lyrics are to HOT and this battle is won
yungillwill forget you, I should be battling the Sun
with the heat that I spit it's my only rival
i'll have you on the floor, shaking, like a Holy Ghost revival
you don't have guns, your not a thug, and I don't take you serious
you couldn't draw blood if you had ovaries and a period
this is survival of the fittest
and I will have my survival
the only verses better than mine are the ones in the Bible
when it comes to rapping I'm one of the greats
your A.K.A must be 0 gravity because you hold no weight
I'll end your fate, your just I little fairy
I can demolish more than 27chapters, try a hole library

u dropped ya verse dont pick it up cuz i leave u fucked in tha game/
ill will hot u cant see that u fuckin wit flames/
u must not know who u fuckin wit mane/
leave u wit a scorched figure and a melted frame/
u threw a lot of punches but none of em hurt /
i wasnt feelin it dog like a ghost touchin my shirt /
make you like a landmark put ya face in the turf/
u punchlines playin hide go seek/
u should be a veggie eater cuz u dont no beef /
ya punches aight ya flows is crap/
and i know you bitin of some cat /
cuz u dont have tha talent to come up wit somethin that wack

ok lets get the votes in guys.............................................. .................................................. .......................

uppin for some votes............................................. .................................................. ..................

ozone = winner
his rymes is better
his punches is better
his flo is better
also his vocabulary makes yung ill will look elementary like 3rd grade

i appreciate the vote but too bad it doesnt count cause you aint got 100 posts.................lets go people we need votes here

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i guess you guys dont like to vote for newbie battles cause you know you cant buy our votes with yours cause we cant vote yet

Do me a favor and check this battle out
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64807

I'll be sure to vote on this one

you dogg, this was a good battle, i have to admit i liek em both even though ozone can with more lines..hmmm somebody gotta be a winner.. you'll know soon enough when i drop y decision..

one

Man...

Don't let these freeposting motherfuckers invade ya thread.

THEY KNOW THAT VOTE FOR ME FIRST SHIT IS AGAINST THE RULES!!!

Anyway...

Ozone took this with better wordplay, metas, and complexity.

Neither one had punchlines that made me say,"Damn!"

So it goes to the one with better structure and flow.

Ozone.

i think ozone ttok this wit ez
ill will jus ain't ill
ozones punches and flow was flammes
my vote
ozone

sorry i ddn't edit this in, i can't edit
but here's a link
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64783

uppin for more votes............................................. .................................................. .....................................