Tha Remix v. MC Rory Breaker
 

10-12 lines (5-6 bars)
No D/R, Hate Votes, all that.
You spit first.

hey man can we make 15-20 lines?............................................ ....................................

Yeah, that's cool. I'll make the changes right now.....
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thank you....... do i spit first or you?.............................................. ..........................

Crap, I can't make the changes, It isn't working, but it is still OK for 15-20 lines. All voters make sure they know this.

ok cool.................................... i'm almost done wit my rhyme........................................

You spit first, I'll drop after that.........
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actually 10-12 lines is better for me........sorry i was eating............................................ .....

I'm an ill lyricist like king kong hear me roar//
I'ma tko this shit and have u yellin' NO MORE!//
Like busta "call an ambulance" cuz you gon' need-one//
Man u couldn't spit quick if u were "boricua" like big-pun//
I gotta big-one no not that silly fagg, a big-gun and it's just for you//
I'm spittin' kid while u playin' games like jump rope and skip-to-my-lou//
Steppin' to me is like steppin' to tha plate of an all-star game of baseball//
I'ma finish this off before he elevates haha "IF" he elevates just in case-y'all//
So with tha ending of this shit allow me to switch it up quick//
Tha way i spit will make u shit bricks while ur girl lickin' my dick//
I'm out for now as i leave you with a lyrical scar of defeat//
I'm tha king of these forums so sit back down in your seat//

Whatever, just spit your verse, and I'll drop afterwards.
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good luck.............................................. .................................................. .......

Tha Remix, The newbe thinks he's got skills,
But I'll make sure to show this guy the drills.
Brother, the only Remix you need is for your style,
I am the Judge and Jury, and this is your trial.
You wanna challenge me, Well you gotta have the crazies,
After this battle, you'll be pushing a lot of daisies.
This is your orientation, after this you'll enter the fray,
You gotta learn to challenge an MC that won't blow you away.
Now I know you're new to this, and you're gonna have to learn,
If you keep up the Herb ways, you're gonna crash and burn.
When this battle ends, hopefully you'll gain a thing or two,
Like some skills and flow after your pitiful debut.

not bad not bad.......i ain't a newby to this rap game just to RB...............................................

i liked tha remix. he had betta flow n' punches good battle tho

thanks hostile spitter........but can u poll vote cuz i see u have over 100 posts........... thank you props to rory breaker