Tears Of Youth
 

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deep lyrics yo. nice ass beat, jedi mind tricks hehe. could use a lil touch up on flow. gets a lil off beat and the flow is off at some parts. but overall this is good as fuck for rhymin for only 2 months.

that part where its all echoed n shit was ILL as fuck.....like mind said tha flow was a bit off here and there....very minor though
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listenin....audio seems real quick....... not bad though, just somethin i noticed........ flow was pretty nice, beat is on that serious tip, so are the lyrics....... works good together........ dont like the reverb on the hook......... that didnt catch me really........the verses were nice, lyrics were nice, beat is nice........ only thing that didnt really appeal to me was the hook..........

pretty nice shit..
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From texas and just like em i just don'f give a fuck

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Alright herb can you please fuck off and stop clogging my thread...Thanx For The Reply Nyce..Much Respect...Yeah The Hook is What Lets This Down But its one of my major flaws...i'm pretty lost on hooks when the beat doesn't switch up haha i had no idea what to put for this so i jsut did the reverb to make it stand out haha....To get someone to sing or something would be good but meh...i can't and don't know anyone that can haha but yeah its def something i can work on thanx...Pz...