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Mad Man 07-19-03 01:32 PM

AxL is God (0-0) vs. whitelightning (0-0)
 
Alright New Rules..

8-20 LINE Maximum

Check Ins : TUESDAY

Verses By : THURSDAY

No Biting, D/R, Recycling of Any Kind..

AxL is God 07-19-03 02:15 PM

In for the easy win. . I'll drop after you partna and match it. Heh.


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whitelightning 07-19-03 04:01 PM

check check...I haven't nailed a verse in about three weeks..spit
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whitelightning 07-23-03 02:40 AM

Ima clobber on ur head with my original michelin treads
Be contactin my VW Van, instead of my hand
dis is a tie?, you inspectin with your eyes shut wide open
my rhymes illest exposed, you compose the wackest proses'
your audio is a constant moan, nuttin short of an addict on methodone
ya always tweakin and seekin for a place every week
just some outta place renegade, always snortin for a blade
ur version is whacker too, stacker two, is made to beef your rhymes too
I'ma on track to the throne, I just got the superior tone
you ain't fuckin knockin on heaven's door, you just some cheap rappin whore
your abominable rap quotient, wasn't bona fied potent
changin your name ain't commencin an elevation your game
your a legend in your own intellctual mind, heard better in milli's exsitence
not capable of a strong resistence, you can't excercise the distance
you never thought a so called underdog woulda fought and work for what I got?
this method is self taught, not hot mainstream making lil eyes gleam
tha alliance is the rap compliance, not www.techkiegrievance.com
put more tape @ them nerd specs, buy plenty of batteries for your calculator
i just not feeling it yo, dis better be enough to go 1-0

**walks away disgusted....**

19 Lines..Match..

AxL is God 07-23-03 03:11 AM

AxL is a fuckin demon, that's all I need for open hypes
Cuz I came to toss shit up, but white is scared of heights
I'll nazi this boys skills, he's washed up, just a dirty jew
And I'll put 2 and 2 together, wait I was calculating ya IQ
I'm not mad at you, but you're in this so I'm pissed
Got ya spitting teeth, like I was ya fuckin dentist
I smack hoes, my gift of rap prose, Axl is ya God, and RB's hero
But don't think you're 1 in a million, cuz you're followed by zeros
Slap you till ya go numb, this is what happens when AxL rolls
And I'm quick to cut ya throat up like it had volume controls
Ya haven't been rode in years kid, like a used-car
White is here getting pissed on worse then his avatar
Haven't tried, I'll slit ya eyes, and pour in a pint of gin
Cuz I've got ya stiff worse then when rigamortis kicks in
Slice this fag, until his cheek-bones dip and start to sag
And send him to heaven with his soul, in a doggy bag

Here's 16. . all I felt I needed to do.

whitelightning 07-23-03 03:55 AM

props dawg......good luck......

Holla yall.......let the voting begin......and the records be updated......

13th Disciple 07-23-03 02:44 PM

man....let me get strait to the point.....i'm tired of quoting and
blah blah blah.....so.....white....wasn't feelin it.....u had the flow...
didn't feel the punches or anything.......axl.....good job.....better
than white.....but decent enuff to pull the W....blah blah blah.....
vote=axl is not God

Caramac 07-23-03 02:57 PM

One sided battle in my opinion, white had flow but all his punches were blahzay and not really hard hitting or too effective,
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Cuz I came to toss shit up, but white is scared of heights

^ heh, not bad Axl, pretty original . .
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But don't think you're 1 in a million, cuz you're followed by zeros

^ Fucking dope, enough said.

Vote - God

Phrantik 07-23-03 03:04 PM

vote axl.
vet battles newb... vet wins.
it was a sheer case of better punches, wordplay,
and skill..

easy battle to vote on.

ToNe-E 07-23-03 03:12 PM

But don't think you're 1 in a million, cuz you're followed by zeros

DaMn .. ^ Fuckin Dope

lmao .. AxL got it by a long shot, he killed this
guy With Punches .. As i said in the Magazine ..
Just Practice, and ONE DAY You Shall Be Able
To Come dope My Newbie Friend .. White Just
Didnt Come Effective With the Punches .. Nuff
Said .. Pz

Oxygen 07-23-03 03:29 PM

iight ok battle.But Axl got this he had betta punz and metaz......
white a had a decent flow but axl had nice original punz which
white lacked.

Vote=AxL

my vote dont matta cuz i cant poll vote.....oh well

Derive 07-23-03 04:27 PM

not really much to say i mean it was a one sided battle.....heres the breakdown

punches-axl
wordplay-axl
vocab-axl
structure-axl
overall-axl

vote-axl

AxL is God 07-23-03 05:47 PM

6-0. . poll says 1-0. .

Nice battle white. And for everyone else in the league to know. . I'm taking the title. . and going undefeated. . HAHAHAHA.

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Merking King 07-23-03 07:17 PM

Damn AxL is God took this shit
both came out nice tho
i wasn't feelin WhiteLightings verse at the end

vote-AxL is God

cameronj86 07-23-03 07:27 PM

Axl got this one with nice punches and dope wordplay. It was'nt very close but it was a good battle....

Vote: Axl


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