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Cycles
I Stand At A Summit..Gazing With My Hand To My Stomach...
Plannin To Plummet..Through The Dirt..Sand And The Rubbish... The Land As My Luggage..I’m Forced To Carry The Weight... Of Times Under Airy Debate...Please Make Light Of This... I Think A Parody’s Great..It’s A First Living Monogamous... Married To Fate..Who Just Seems To Want To Bury It’s Mate... And Put An End To All That I Love..Home..My Very Estate... It’s Scary To Wait..With No Clue..No One To Show You... Life Slows Due..To The Fact You Have Nothing To Grow To... Fasten Your Seat Belt..In Fact..Grab Your Neck To Tie The Rope... Cause You Might As Well..No Options..Views..Or Kaleidoscope... Just Try To Cope..If It’s Possible..Let Out A Cry Of Hope... And Have Faith..To Dive Head First Down The Highest Slope... Am I Biased..Nope..I Just Have Views..I’ll Share Them With You... Please Feel Free..And Just Drop A Reply If You Dare To Issue... Something As Personal..Flowing With Tears To Tear The Tissue... Stripped Of Your Clothes..From Head..To Tips Of The Toes... Let It All Out..The Feelings Slalom Down The Bridge Of Your Nose... It Grips As It Goes..Trying Only Just To Trouble The Brain... Not Subtle..But Plain..It Finally Drips Down As A Puddle Of Rain... But What’ll It Stain..Your Mind State..Still Filled With Blind Hate... With Who To Blame..What..The Movies..Music..The Crime Rate... Through All Of The Clever Going..This Process Is Ever Slowing... I’m Talking About Life..It’s Project..And You..Never Knowing... How To Present Yourself..Put Up Masks To Cover Laughter... Regardless How Many Problems You Solve..There’s Others After... And That’s The Cycle..Then It All Hits With A Stunning Smack... Troubles Are Like Football..They Always Keep Running Back... Now You Know..Life Slows..And Stops On A Comma..Forgiving... You For The Fact You Can’t Live..Without The Drama Of Living... |
hahahahaha, nice one
wanna collab bruv? |
Yeah this cat is sick , He always spit flames , Ur vocab was sick in this Piece , ur wordplay was blazing as always , ur metaphors were Nice , Hell this piece was just SICKNESS...I give u a 9/10
Return da favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67799 |
Thx Ya'll...Uppin This Piece
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Uppin This Piece 1 Mo Gen..
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this pacaso mac the "street avenger" ok dog i will admit, that was kinda fire. you talked subjects that are different. ya flow was pretty good to. keep it up dog
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thx^...uppin
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"But What’ll It Stain..Your Mind State..Still Filled With Blind Hate...
With Who To Blame..What..The Movies..Music..The Crime Rate..." ^^Reminded me of skillz needed to make it to tha mainstream^^ Tellin you right now, you should expand your talent. Start gettin in tha studio if your not already, and really get this kinda shit out on a tape or cd. Eventually someone will notice it. It couldnt hurt anything so try it. But this was an ill piece, when i first started readin it i thought i was another poemy piece. But when i started readin it and it smacked me wid dopeness lol. Keep tha shit up. -1- |
Very nice drop, i liked it, nice vocab and wordplay. shit is just hot.............hit my piece up...its crazy...lol insanity is tha title
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Thx Ya'll..Uppin This Piece
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Uppin This Piece...
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You're A Biter!
you bit this off of braisen outlaw from rapmusic.com http://board.rapmusic.com/showthrea...threadid=596674 |
Kid,I Already Did An Audio For This So Stfu !..
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and your point is? you bit...
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The Audio Is From May Man...I'll TRY To Upload It On Soundclick n Then I'll Show You
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