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Battle: Triztwarrior Vs Natural_Disaster
Here are the rules:
10 lines max, No hate, d/r or crew votes, No prewrittens Ill spit first |
right lad u spit am ready for it
try go easy as am new to dis shit lad mind it wont matta i still kick ass lol (just using 100 characters lol) |
Hey yo,
Naturally a disaster//You're so damn slow, could I flow any faster?//Looks like this prick pricked himself, lemme get you a plaster//You expected a newbie, you got the fuckin master//Grab a pistol, and into submission I'll start to blast//In a minute you're gonna need a whole body cast//Your style is embarassing, its so stale, you've failed//Get yo ass back to Wales, you like a beached whale//All you can do it flail, from this boat named the Rap, you should bail//Open my sails, let them billow, sail towards ya//Comin to kill ya, start to bellow, im gettin iller// Next time ill finish ya :P |
I went sortof easy on ya lol, but I dont doubt ur skills I dont think i really needed to :) ...................................(dam this 100character rule! I h8 it so badly lol).............................................. .......
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lol @ the 100 character thingy, good rhymes lad
OK OK OK OK LISTEN LISTEN me 5yr old sis got more skill// you betta take note of ma flow its so fuckin ill// better go grab urself a beer your not gunna like this// if i'd have used protection you wouldn't even be ere i regret the first kiss// get your mum sum rub she'll even let u ave her up da fuckin bum// your rhymes are fucking wank// mine are that tight they're blowing you away like a fuckin tank// i might be new to this// check it out im totaly taking da fucking piss// |
Trizt took this
Better dissing Nt disaster needs a lil elevating but he still learnin da ropes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67759 Vote goes to triz warrior |
hey yo,
thats some okay stuff u pulled there i guess PS tell your five year old sis daddy is ashamed of her from me (dont worry Natural you'll figure wat i said out someday :P) |
synikill : : Yeah am still learning this shit lad soz i aint as good as you lot but as i said im startin ere so i'll get betta with time
Triztwarrior : : Soz mate but i think my lines where iller am new to this shit but whateever good battle dawg |
nah man
natural you need to elevate seriously.... acctualy it wasn't a bad battle.... you both need elevation vote-triz he had a better verse over all but i didnt like your structure cruise the bords and look around this isn't much of a game people acctualy spit sensibol lines on this site |
lol okay Kautious ill work on incorporatin some more relevant lines in my shit thanks for the feedback :)
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kautious thanks for the advice man, i'll have a look round gimme some ideas like, again sorry about earlier lol actin a prick 'n' all
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uppin for votes :) ************************************************** ************************************************** ****
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yo
Natural u have 4 unfinished (or somethin like that) battles happenin right now, just a warnin; ur only allowed two unclosed battles happenin at one time. be careful dawg Peace Out |
shit i didnt know that shit dawg nobody told me like
nooooooo i lost them all anyways but i dont wanna piss no peeps off like hopefuly it will go un-noticed peace out |
Uppin for votes......................................come on ppl! vote plz someone needs to win this battle............................................ .......................................
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