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Young VS Meks
aight yo....
13 lines max usual vote rules You drop first Dont take forever |
meks spit something for our battle its right underneath!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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yo
you wanna have it wit cash, then grabit u'll turn ta ash/ brunin touch when i crash, bigger than a 10 keg bash/ an overloaded brain means the shipments late/ coted pain gleems on me as u git ya hip replaced/ shit re-traced, it's a glich he faced, i dug'a ditch now he dirt encased/ like a prosecutor werks the case, i'm out for a bloody verdict in this place/ text lines the best hacker in the world couldn't erase, an uncatchablle pace/ the un-crackablle source code even ya fortune teller couldn't forbode/ but here's ya crystal ball, as i stood in 6 spots at once ya punches missed'em all/ im'a mygician liftin mc's, wit telekenetic levitation battle technique/ no prescription refill please, i'm energetic wen disgracin Jet Li/ too fast fo da one, leave u legs wit two casts not one/ now who got run, cuz u aint movin, not even makin an attempt/ i'm choosin the life of brakin on the set/ fuckin suspenseful shit u breakin a swet, wheres that breather, u takin one yet/ Well i take it u should jet and just completely forget/ i could get nasty but u'll prally beat me, u a vet/ |
uhhh.....i said 13 lines max............................................... .................................................. .............................................
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but dats ok since ima merk u...u didnt even cum at me dawg...it flowed but a complete idiot coulda tyed a lot of werds dat rymed....lol.....no hate tho dawg....im droppin soon...
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This gonna be easy for P......
Can ya hit this up... dawg... And i'll vote on this when you've dropped...... Pce http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68478 |
It's like a ~bullet-wound-ta-da-heart~ cuz against me ~ya-goin-down-quick~//
Even if I ~spit-on-you~ with ~lyrical-virus~ you couldnt ~call-yaself-sick~// My verse ~"strike"-like-"lightning"~...~"boom"-like"thunder"~// Come ~"tornado-twistin"~ at ya and leave ya ~werds-in-a-blunder~// Now it's like we ~playin-games~, cuz i'm ~"monopolyzing"-da-board~// Funny...I could end ya ~rap-carreer~ wit a simple ~"yank-of-da-cord"~// Meks da only kid on ~RB~ whos verse is ~laconic-and-illiterate~// Couldnt get ~his-fire-goin~ if he ~quenched-his-thirst-wit-excellerant~// U aint a ~scientist~ but goin ~ova-da-max~...Why u gotta be ~testin-me~// ~0-4~ battlin me? ~0-5~ is wut u ~destined-to-be~// ~Loookin-for-a-win~? Den y u ~facin-da-best-in-Young-P~// I came into dis battle wit da ~intent-and-motive-to-kill~// But dis time derres no ~"way"~ u'll win, even if derres a ~"will"~// see i did it in 13 lines.... |
reference:
Playin games=monopoly...get it... End ya rap carreer...yank cord shit=computer mc Laconic=sparing of werds Excellerant=makes fires start quicker last line=where derres a "will" derres a "way"...not dis time |
wow. Meks wasnt even a battle verse...at all
Well i take it u should jet and just completely forget/ i could get nasty but u'll prally beat me, u a vet/ ^no. Meks read some verse in the Lethal Lyricist League before you battle again dunny...you dont understand the concept. Young. you only had maybe 1 or 2 punches the rest was filler..try to focus on attacking them and not rapping..get more personal with your punches... vote= Young P cause he had a battle verse. |
iight p got this, meks got a lil flow, and more vocab, but tha punches weren't there.
hit this up honestly..... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68992 |
dezyir i agree with you homie was just rappin and not battlein this is called rapbattles not fuck the rappin lounge or some shit like that
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cum on.....3-0 and uppin............................................. .................................................. .........................
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Young P gets this better wordplay and hits.....and vocab, I liked the other guys flow better though.....
Vote Young P..................... vote on my battle with AK if you get chance!!!! |
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0048#post660048
hit dat up too....honest/fair votes............................. |
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