Taktik (2-0) vs. Feeble Minded (1-0)
 

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Checkin in................................................ .................................................. .............Should be good feeble............................................ ..........................

uh...damn i forgot that new week would be up.............................
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gluck taktix

umm..read it all, its not long and im tryin a new style, need good feedback on each line and which were dopest.

yo. .
this is the LETHAL lyricist league, go where u need to be.
cuz only time he's gotten a W is after T U V! (lmfao)
see, my lyrics 'enchant his mind' like puttin 'spells to his dome'.
when its time to attack he 'rolls over' like 'cellular phones'!
this maniac's gonna have a 'brain attack'. . and get 'hit by mind'!
he's like the child at the back of line. . cuz the kids behind.
kids the kind, to have no 'taktik' except for 'in his name'.
reach his only GOAL. . but instant messenger is his AIM! (its in his sig)
its insane, but its like a 'toast game' the way he 'roll play' faulty.
he's married to style. . and i cause splits like adultery!
use ctrlaltdel, like 'descendin components' he will fall 'part.
cant sell an album. . so he rolls back the prices like wall-mart!


yo, dont vote by whoever has the most ~~~~~ and ''''''
hed win that.............lol sry taktik but u lways do do that.


vote fair and break down well please.
im ill.

yo tak match plz

STOP FREEPOSTINg... HAD TO CLEAR THIS THREAD UP..................
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Today in Bio class we learn about Herbs and Organics...more importantly how they die...

Before the session....I must get rid of the BABE and expose my RUTH-less Agression//
Economy Lesson...I'll FEE and BILL ya MIND till you cant PAY ATTENTION//(fee + bill=feeble)
Witness too many herbs that bit bars, so I come bearing an organic fit mouthgaurd//
Venomous spit left mouth scarred, 'Where to get merked today?' like RB-GPS Northstar//
Sickness in DNA traits, slash ya 'jeans' n' leave a GAP in ya family tree//(GAP jeans=genes)
Undefeatable Tendencies? *yawn as I breath* you Pussies Slidin' like Felix-on-skis//
This shit like voodoo pins in your foot how this is a-tack-in-your-sole//(attackin your soul)
Expose your prewrits, couldn't spit off the dome if sitting on a flipped-over bowl//
Spinal breach while I spit ill fluids from my whole Heart n' Soul, kinda like my Vitals leak//
Gotta viral-speach, your crew like 2 dead split Siamese, goin wish you KEPT THE MERGE WIT ME//

How much herbs must a word merk first b4 a word or verb serve the verse n' merk?

lol@ the thing at the end.

str8 verse dawg.
the shit about the merge was nuthin personal.
i just didnt like a certain member of ya crew (now banned)


sry for the post evolve but ill barely up thin ne way!

Uppin for votes on this shit (1)

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Feeble's Verse

this is the LETHAL lyricist league, go where u need to be.
cuz only time he's gotten a W is after T U V! (lmfao)
ehh, okay.. naht as funny as you made it out to be

see, my lyrics 'enchant his mind' like puttin 'spells to his dome'.
when its time to attack he 'rolls over' like 'cellular phones'!
good line.

this maniac's gonna have a 'brain attack'. . and get 'hit by mind'!
he's like the child at the back of line. . cuz the kids behind.
First set was good.. second fell

kids the kind, to have no 'taktik' except for 'in his name'.
reach his only GOAL. . but instant messenger is his AIM! (its in his sig)
Okay i guess..

its insane, but its like a 'toast game' the way he 'roll play' faulty.
he's married to style. . and i cause splits like adultery!
had potential.. but no

use ctrlaltdel, like 'descendin components' he will fall 'part.
cant sell an album. . so he rolls back the prices like wall-mart!
okay finisher..

Overall : Not bad.. seen better... 6/10

Before the session....I must get rid of the BABE and expose my RUTH-less Agression//
Economy Lesson...I'll FEE and BILL ya MIND till you cant PAY ATTENTION//(fee + bill=feeble)
Played wordplay

Witness too many herbs that bit bars, so I come bearing an organic fit mouthgaurd//
Venomous spit left mouth scarred, 'Where to get merked today?' like RB-GPS Northstar//
Flowed well.. nice punch

Sickness in DNA traits, slash ya 'jeans' n' leave a GAP in ya family tree//(GAP jeans=genes)
Undefeatable Tendencies? *yawn as I breath* you Pussies Slidin' like Felix-on-skis//
Same as the line above

This shit like voodoo pins in your foot how this is a-tack-in-your-sole//(attackin your soul)
Expose your prewrits, couldn't spit off the dome if sitting on a flipped-over bowl//
Nice wordplay.. second line wasn't all that good tho

Spinal breach while I spit ill fluids from my whole Heart n' Soul, kinda like my Vitals leak//
Gotta viral-speach, your crew like 2 dead split Siamese, goin wish you KEPT THE MERGE WIT ME//
Okay personal.. bad finisher in my view

Overall : Good verse, good flow w/ punches.. 8/10

Vote - Taktik

Tatik won this battle wit better overall everthing. Most of Feeb's shit was just wack, especially this line........

kids the kind, to have no 'taktik' except for 'in his name'.
reach his only GOAL. . but instant messenger is his AIM!

If this was a real battle and mics & people were involved, u prolly would got booed off stage for sayin dat lame CPU nerd ass shit.
Who the Fuck cares about AIM? Getta Life.

this is the LETHAL lyricist league, go where u need to be.
cuz only time he's gotten a W is after T U V! (lmfao)
^ Ummmmm No.

Man I cant go on pointin out the rest of his faults, Tatik won this shit easily..........

Vote = Tatik

uhh..

i may buy a mic just to battle your wack fuck ass.
i wrote that shit in like ten minutes.
ur one to talk shit when ya have a wack ass record and cant rap.
and i wrote this shit late as fuck and thought that one line was funny then now i think it sucks...

LOL OH YEA...IVE ALREADY BEATEN YOU,....
HERB.

IM ASHAMED TO HAVE WRITTEN MOST OF THAT.

SUREAL CLOSE THIS AND GIVE HIM THE WIN.

AND ICEBERG U WANNA BATTLE ILL BEAT U AGIN U WACK FUCK.

yeah. . taktik stretched out his bars
which was whack . but he had a
couple fairly nice lines. feeble you
need to keep writing without strectched
lines. . just up your content the way
it read feeble would get my vote
but i realized that's not what it's about
so . .


V. taktik.

i think taktik came away with this win even though his bars was stretched like hell, i was feelin them a little more feeble urs was alright don't get me wrong, but i have seen u come a lot better, so im givin this to taktik for good meta's and multi's

poll vote- taktik

Aite... i've talked to both of you... so no hate either way. I think Taktik took this, he killed it with wordplay. Feeble already admitted defeat so i don't think i have to explain too much...

This shit like voodoo pins in your foot how this is a-tack-in-your-sole//(attackin your soul)

^That lines sums up the whole verse, nice by both though, peace.

vote=taktik... can a mod poll my vote?