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shady chaos v.s am at cha (rematch)
Yo u wanted tha rematch there4 u must spit 1st
rules are: 1.10-30 lines 2.no feeding 3.no d/r votes 4.no hate votes good luck to u! |
Aight lets try to make this memorable
Cause last time it was terrible Battling me makes you sound edible Your gonna crumble faster than a cookie Isn’t in incredible that I'm only a rookie Picture me and him on a track With a beat and a mic I can beat him back Then let him face the fact Your gonna fall off worse than an acrobat Feeding isn’t part of you creed Cause not everyone can flip better then me I ride fire like Apollo god of the son Remember Rocky only lost in part one Italian stallion commanding battalions Let the order go, let shady know Ill flow over you like a galleon Few hints to those who don’t know what I'm saying: I mention creed then Apollo for a reason… a rocky reference ‘Let the order go’ has a double meaning… 1st I'm a commander, 2nd no order means chaos. A galleon is a type of war ship, I'm staying with the war theme Now go and vote for shady! |
My rhymes make your brain freeze like slush
Or slurpees, with unpredictable bumps like herpes Witness a murder recital Flippin' murderous pages Rippin' out organs that's vital With killa' 12 gauges How can you murder a demon, whose heart never skips a beat You better wake up, you dreamin', come see me where the gangsters meet Confusing opponents Escaping traps like Whoodini Show 'em that a G can lead an army like Musalini Y-O M-O-M-A S-U-C-K M-Y D-I-C-K Your moma be suckin' my dick every day and I love it Inhale, Exhale blowin' my dick out in public Got me nuttin' she takin' doses down her throat that got her chokin' My dick is like a squirt gun on her face it super soaked it This shit is bigger than Mafia hits Dapper don with the ensemble of killers and shit How can you murder a killa' I refuse to die Niggas be plotting and scheming On my drug supply |
shady had the heat....betta battle verse...punches were iight and disses were good...wordplay was good...
Am was a lil elemetary....you had a couple oneliners that hit but other than that you gotta up ya punches betta...disses was lacked and wordplay was none! ante up!! vote shady............................................. .............return fav! |
shady chaos merked you again, you still gotta elevate and get some better punches...
VOTE=SHADY CHAOS |
wow this was pretty bad guys..
dont rap about moms, cum, guns, drugs, or how "hot" you are. the object of a battle is to insult the opponent not make yourself look good. i honestly didnt see 1 single punch here. anywhere. just glorifying yourselves. am at cha had the less played lines and while they were general, had things that somewhated resembled a personal. but seriously guys, read some battles in legends, read some in the LLL...read some in the elites if you have to. whatever you do, make sure you get better. |
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yo hit this battle up he was a no show http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9760#post679760 |
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Is it just me or do I just fucking suck .................................................. ....... .................................................. ....... 100 characters |
COME ON PPLE START VOTING DONT SLEEP ON THIS SHIT!!
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yo shady took this, better punches, and flow, shitty battle, i'v seen shady do better on other battle boards.................. ''//.............................
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yeah im guna have to go wit Shady Chaos
better overall verse can ya'll peep this please............. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=71321 |
COME ON PPLE UPPIN FOR SUM VOTES HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Am At Cha
I ride fire like Apollo god of the son Remember Rocky only lost in part one ONLY Hittin Bar . . Shady Chaos My rhymes make your brain freeze like slush Or slurpees, with unpredictable bumps like herpes Kinda Hit OVERALL THIS WAS WAK, Wow Why Did Someone PM Me Askin Me To Vote?, I Give This To Shady For The Fact That Atleast They ATTEMPTED To Punch There Opponent. Wow -walks away- |
i wsh i could vote......but since i can't........i havn't
good verse from both of you............................................ shady came juss abit harder... |
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Tonya took tha words outta my mouth Vote shady return the favor against 2face and vision.1 |
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