Callison Vs Focus'd
 

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no crew votes
explain ya votes

I'll spit first


may da best man win....

we will do 2 drops each!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


When I drop its hot like when lead sparks/
Drinkin Slim Fast but Im still PHATER than ya momas stretch marks/
I descend from a long line of excellence/
Been penned since you was in ya pops nutsack,a swimmin specimen/
A lyricist since you was a new-birthed livin cell/
Ill place you in a livin hell when my bars transform from words ta steele,vertically assemblin around you,lock you down in my rhythms prison cell/
To you, this is tha battle of ya career but for me its an exhibition/
You went on an expedition flippin through Webster ta find my words, dont even know tha definition/
Its an insult for me ta step ta your lower rank of command/
Ill make you a man by tha pace of my hand,bars fall straight from tha plan placed ta withstand,formin ancient pyramid foundations on tha face of tha sand/
Your punchlines do little to arouse tha imagination/
You a simulation of stimulation,lyrical imatation/
So scurry about, tha board without, pitty or doubt, hurry tha count/
Fuckin rookies got you gassed up "Focus'd aint one of tha cats I need ta worry about"/
Bitch Ima savage, raw like uncooked meat, I spit debree/
Fire & brimstone, I been known, cut you off at tha ankles & make you drink your runnin blood so you can "taste de-feat"/

***Callision Arises***
I want ya'll to feel me on this one

This guys not worthy of contendin, he's better off doin sumthin like poetry or
pendin,
he couldn't beat me if it was my rhymes instead of health I was lendin.
I'll rake and bake this angel food cake, till his body is flipped over and floatin in a
lake,
why battle a newbie that'll never surpass great.

*********Ok Let Me Get Started for REAL***********

You think i'm soft cause of the
rumors,
unaware that i'll pump so much lead in ya head it'll start to form a tumor,
you assume that jus cuz you get props your a
ruler,
but really your not hot your colder than an ice
cooler,
my rhymes will school ya....

i'll run you ova like I always drive a
Lotus,
if ya mind was clear you still wouldn't be
FOCUS'D,
you couldn't battle me if we switched places and you wrote this...
I'm lyrically inclined to leave you mentally and physically
blind,
lines form to bars and leave permanent
scars,
in ya chest and lungs so your unable to par with this unbelievable star...
Liars prevail thru these cock riders, if yo nutz waz a parachute many ppl would be hang
gliders,
I bring attention to determine my ambition, with meaningful intention,
you couldn't get at me if I was in your local
listings,
I stay blistering jus to keep the watchers
listening,
i'd bus ya head watch the blood run in the sun jus to watch the glistenin...

you not ready to keep me steady, with all the lyrical lead in you ya name should be
leady,
really i'm tired of typin and flowin, you suck matter of fact why am I still goin

naw we will stay wit one drop tho......dat wuz hott kid.......uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Can some ppl plz Vote on this battle so we can hurry and close it

oh yeah and nice battle cuz keep up the good work

holla!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

damn iz there anyone on tonight dat can vote? i dont battle just cuz i like to type................................uppin!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Man I don't know but someone needs to judge this cause I don't jus type this for fun either so.... let's get some votes on this

yo lets get some votes in on da real.............................................. ....................uppin?

Fire & brimstone, I been known, cut you off at tha ankles & make you drink your runnin blood so you can "taste de-feat"/

I heard that line like 3 times....

where? dont tell me ima bitter and u aint got proof where u heard it from.............................................. ..............................

Both your shit was dope. This line was hot by Callision:

i'll run you ova like I always drive a
Lotus,
if ya mind was clear you still wouldn't be
FOCUS'D

Anyway that's who get's my vote, Callision.

well u dont matter u cant vote so im still uppin for votes............................................. .........................................

come on playaz lets get some votes in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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we need more votes.................................... uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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yo Focus'd you KILLED this cat:

"A lyricist since you was a new-birthed livin cell/
Ill place you in a livin hell when my bars transform from words ta steele,vertically assemblin around you,lock you down in my rhythms prison cell/ "

That ALONE took this... but the flow, punches, vocab, all much more intelligent, well-written.....I might just have to battle you myself soon...

vote = Focus'd

yo both of ya hit this up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74241