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ÄzNPrOdiG¥ .:vs:. Doctor Jizzle
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no crew, hate, D/r votes no biting, feeding, recycling u drop first |
checkin in......ill spit in a bit.....
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iight hurry up
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aight.......keeeeeyyyyyinnnn
yo ima expose dis fake MC IMPOSTER if i aint come hard u gonna COME-SOFTER he so dumb he thought Jam Masta J WAS-A-DOCTER!!//(docter J..) His name is Doctor J but he neva PASS-THA-ROCK when im done u gonna CATCH-A-LOSS dey call me tha “master” tha way I got dis BATTLE-ON-LOCK!!// (master lock is a kind of locks…) Mah flows ARE-VITAL u got worse “key styles” retards at deaf PIANO RECITALS i jus froze ya spit im tha IceMan jus call me YOUR RIVAL//(tha iceman aka George Gervin was Docta J’s Rival..) Docter ya flames gone ill PASS U MY LIGHTER hittin boyz from tha back is tha only way UD BE A FIGHTER dis kid thinks he iLL…jus cuz he CATCHES-A-BITER!!//(sez he catches biters...) Prepare to b SLIT-IN-TWO i thought u wud bring death tha way u KISS-A-JEW u spit like itz TWIGS-U-THREW when i finish dis clown hes gonna b SIX-N-TWO!!//(judas kissed jesus and he was a jew...and hes gay so he kisses jews..hah and hes 6-1 right now..) aight......datz my shit....uppin fo urs... |
"Punches After Punches"
U A "Artificial-Intellectual-Child"...Born An "Illiterate-Retard-At-Birth", I'm "Lyrically-Immortal"...Killin "False-Mc's" Who Dwell On The Great Earth//2 Prodigy, Ur Gonna "Die-Quick"...Ur Very "Imminent-To-Ur-Death", I'll "Slice-Ur-Throat" And Leave U To "Choke-On-Ur-Breath"//4 U Couldn't "Have-Hot-Rhymes" Even If I "Sent-Ur-Verse-To-Hell", U Couldn't "See-Bars" Even If U Was "Convicted-Of-Biting" And "Took-To-Jail"//6 Just Like "Chris-Tucker" This Fag Won't Live To See "Next-Friday", He Just A "Dick-Sucker"...Who's Verse "Get's-Passed" Like "John-Elway"//8 Ur "Throwing-Punches" Like A "Child-In-The-Womb"...Your Arms Ain't "Fully-Developed-Yet", My Punches Are Perfected...There Hittin U Direct Like Sharp Bullets From A Teck//10 uppin 4 vote |
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A Prodigy Is An Intellectual Child Thats Why I Called Him An Artifial Frodigy Or A Fake One ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ uppin 4 votes ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ |
aitte....nice spit.....
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This was an ok battle
both yall had iight spits heres my break down flow=tie<--kinda punches=dr.j vocab=dr-j structure=j dudes verse is just spread all ova overall-j this battle was close but doc got Prodigy In every catagory _________________________________ check out my open battles |
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Thanx 4 da vote
Yo krunk Im might be starting a crew or collabin wit sumone as leaders i'll PM u ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- uppin 4 more votes ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 1-0 |
Ummmmm
flow=AZ punches=kinda of tieed, but more on Doccs side vocab=Dock complexity=Dock Creativity=Dock metas=dock similies=dock Docks verse killed the other kids, But dock u got horrible flow their all run on sentenced, anyway can u return the favour dog, peace http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73175 |
I know dats what im workin on now
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hm......aiight..........
uppin fo votes...... 1-0 Docta............uppin........ |
aiiittttteeeee 2-0 now...
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uppin 4 votes(2)
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