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Solar Eclipse v.s Mortality
Lets Go
:My Rules: Solar Spits First 10-20 Lines No Feeding No Biteing No Recycling No Hate Votes No D/R Votes No Crew Votes No Stretching Lines ECT. Get Ya Verse Up |
Waitin On You Still
It's Been 2 Days Are You Gonna Spit Any Time Soon? .................................................. ...... .................................................. ...... .................................................. ...... |
checkin in, i guess...........if u look at it, its been one day man, you set it up the 20th and here you are reminding me the 21st. But whatever, ill have a verse up by tonite.....ill try to get it done as soon as possible. peace...........
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ok here we go........
Getting crushed, I attack like the homeless cuz ur gettin “bum-rushed,” winning this battle easily like I was given destiny’s touch :: this must be a toilet the way ur shitty spits are getting flushed, my skills are too much, such a disgrace how I turn this kid’s skills to slush // 1 Stock my talent cuz I got it “in-store,” at the surface he looks good but his skills are crap at the core, bore your legs off so u can’t get ur “foot in the door” :: got me lyrically “board” like u were spittin two by fours, with skills galore, why waste time with a bitch who’s avatar shows he’s “piss-poor?” // 2 By battling newbs he thinks he’s great, but lets get your “record straight,” on a scale of 1 to 10, you don’t even rate :: step back and get merked because that’s ur fate, receive nothing but hate, cuz my bars are like traps and you’re “biting the bait” // 3 Toss you this loss, I lyrically spit sacred as if my rhymes were nailed to a cross, cuz you could be Tony Danza and id still question “Who’s the Boss” (old tv show) :: so “revved up” I must be strapped to nos, bitch sucks dicks like they were lollipops, cuz you could spit periods……and still not get ur “points across.” // 4 Knock Mortality for backtalk, cuz I got more rhyme combinations than Master Lock, cuz u spit more basic than ABC building blocks :: erase ur voice so you couldn’t think outside the box (voice box), spits getting mocked, cuz u couldn’t “time ur flow” if you were hands on the clock // 5 Call me Black and Decker cuz this kids getting drilled, build lyrical tactics that destroy the unskilled :: you could bite off this verse and still not get filled, isn’t it ironic……how Mortality (to cause death) is the one here getting killed? // 6 vote on best verse.....im watchin for d/r's, cuz a little birdie told me you seem to have quite a few...............peace. |
Nie Verse
But Yo I'm Pretty Busy Right Now So I'll Post Either Later On Tonight, Or Tomorrow .................................................. ....... |
uppin for this kids verse............................................. ........................dont take too long now.............................
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I'm Writing A Response With Reguards To Notify Solar Eclipse, I Can't Tell If That's Toothpaste Or Cum On His Lips//
His Mom Keeps Pressurein Him For Sexual Activity, But He Can't Let His Boyfriend Find Out Or That Would Ruin His Dignity// I'm Capable Of Inflicting Conflicts With Out Bodily Harm, I'm Shootin Bullets Out My Dick And Call It A Fire Arm// I Got Threatening Substances And Live Ammunition, How Dare You Come On This Site Without My Fuckin Permission// Your In A Position For Verbal Assault, You've Robbed 500 Banks And Aint Ever Hit The Vault// You've Throwin Forth Commission Of Illegal Act, No Need For Practice The Purpose Of Your Verse Is Wack// My Lyrics Is Established And Ready To Leave You Shook, Your Names Under Herb In The Rapbattles Handbook// I'm Possesing Mase So You Dont Try To Rape Me, My Clarifyin Oriented Punchlines So Solar Eclipse Hates Me// You Can't Even Debate The Rate Of Solar's Terrifyin Fate, After I Eclipse His Punchlines And Rub Shit In His Face// |
Since The Lines Are Long, I Juss Did 9 Lines!
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Flow-Mortailty
Punches-Solar Multi's-Mortality Mortality gets the funniness award, that shit made me laugh. Vote-Mortaility Good battle overall, I liked it, Solar your shit was long long and long. Get the condensed and you could get many many mroe wins. Please vote on this for me, noobs need love to:: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74786 |
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[font color=red]Solar Eclipse[/font]
Getting crushed, I attack like the homeless cuz ur gettin “bum-rushed,” winning this battle easily like I was given destiny’s touch :: this must be a toilet the way ur shitty spits are getting flushed, my skills are too much, such a disgrace how I turn this kid’s skills to slush // 1 this was okay.... nothin great.... I liked the toilet line.... the slush was alright Stock my talent cuz I got it “in-store,” at the surface he looks good but his skills are crap at the core, bore your legs off so u can’t get ur “foot in the door” :: got me lyrically “board” like u were spittin two by fours, with skills galore, why waste time with a bitch who’s avatar shows he’s “piss-poor?” // 2 the 'board' line was good wordplauy.... in-store part b4 it was weak tho.... lol i dont like that ur dissin on that avatar... i have that lil guy on my car pissin on the word 'Osama' By battling newbs he thinks he’s great, but lets get your “record straight,” on a scale of 1 to 10, you don’t even rate :: step back and get merked because that’s ur fate, receive nothing but hate, cuz my bars are like traps and you’re “biting the bait” // 3 the "record straight" line was good shit.... this bar was good.... i liked it a lot better than the other two.... Toss you this loss, I lyrically spit sacred as if my rhymes were nailed to a cross, cuz you could be Tony Danza and id still question “Who’s the Boss” (old tv show) :: so “revved up” I must be strapped to nos, bitch sucks dicks like they were lollipops, cuz you could spit periods……and still not get ur “points across.” // 4 I liked this bar too... the Tony Danza line was good... lol I seriously almost wrote about that show in a battle this mornin.... wierd shit.... Knock Mortality for backtalk, cuz I got more rhyme combinations than Master Lock, cuz u spit more basic than ABC building blocks :: erase ur voice so you couldn’t think outside the box (voice box), spits getting mocked, cuz u couldn’t “time ur flow” if you were hands on the clock // 5 wow not bad again..... Call me Black and Decker cuz this kids getting drilled, build lyrical tactics that destroy the unskilled :: you could bite off this verse and still not get filled, isn’t it ironic……how Mortality (to cause death) is the one here getting killed? // 6 pretty decent.... not as good as 3-4-5 tho... you came out pretty weak in 1-2 tho but overall your VERSE was tight..... I think you have a chance of beatin him but lets see how he spit... [font color=red]MORTALITY[/font] I'm Writing A Response With Reguards To Notify Solar Eclipse, I Can't Tell If That's Toothpaste Or Cum On His Lips// This is ok.... not much of an opening though.... His Mom Keeps Pressurein Him For Sexual Activity, But He Can't Let His Boyfriend Find Out Or That Would Ruin His Dignity// Gay punches are overplayed... I thought you would come out a lot stronger I'm Capable Of Inflicting Conflicts With Out Bodily Harm, I'm Shootin Bullets Out My Dick And Call It A Fire Arm// This is alright I Got Threatening Substances And Live Ammunition, How Dare You Come On This Site Without My Fuckin Permission// no offense mort but youve only been on site 15 days lol hes been on more than you so this is kinda 'wack' punch.... Your In A Position For Verbal Assault, You've Robbed 500 Banks And Aint Ever Hit The Vault// You've Throwin Forth Commission Of Illegal Act, No Need For Practice The Purpose Of Your Verse Is Wack// Pretty decent..... one of your better punches.... My Lyrics Is Established And Ready To Leave You Shook, Your Names Under Herb In The Rapbattles Handbook// Is should be are..... rest of it is good tho... pretty decent I'm Possesing Mase So You Dont Try To Rape Me, My Clarifyin Oriented Punchlines So Solar Eclipse Hates Me// You Can't Even Debate The Rate Of Solar's Terrifyin Fate, After I Eclipse His Punchlines And Rub Shit In His Face// This is without a doubt the best two lines in the battle I like the "After I Eclipse his punchlines" Overall I think Solar just came harder.... Mort man you got off track for too much.... if all your bars were like you finsihed it up you woulda had him... he had some good shit like that Danza line... Solar gets my vote |
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Oh forgot to post links.
Hit this up ppl http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75003 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75075 |
Aight No More Quotin
I Dont Like That Shit Juss Type What You Think ................................ ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, <<<<<<<<<<<<<< >>>>>>>>>>>>>> !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
I Think Mortality Took This One Cause He Had Harder Punches And More Personals----------------------------------------------------
Vote=mortality |
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