Tyme.....unfinished
 

Pretty deep song i started doin but never finish a while ago...lookin for critique...maybe ill finish it who knows.


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beat is ok....your voice delivery was kinda low, i dunno if you did that on purpose or not.....but did you.....cuz i noticed you picked up the volume of your voice as you went rhymin on....concept of the song is kool.....flow is good, lyrics were ok, hook is type good.....second verse was hot...feelin it more then the first one....i think you should finish it if you havent yet...keep doin your thing and stay up.....OnE






I'm Ghost...

Beat Is Dopenuss...Spat This With A Different Style Uh...Was Good Though...Hook Was Dope...Flow And Delivery Was Dope...2nd Verse Was Ill....Agreed You Should Def Finish It...End Product Would Be Dope...Pz...

thanx pimp juice pz

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i wish some people would fuckin reply to posts, even if it's just a few words!. Anyways man u got a few good tracks, keep goin!

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Sounds pretty dope beat and lryics go togehter pretty good, vocals could go up a bit its hard to hear....

no doubt good lookin

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hit this up and tell me if its hot or not and be real the song get away

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lmao cats is funny.....they dont give u a reply and expect one from you...bitch move