New To RB- Let me know what U think
 

Did you ever have a feeling you were destined to loose
WELL GUESS WHAT
That feeling is about to come true
I never asked for this gift
I just been blessed with
From the powers above
TO KICK YOUR ASS WITH IT
You see
I don't have to sit around and think of my rhyme
But I admit I do get ideas from time to time
I just let you get me off
Cause it helps me to vibe
I released LONG AGO what I had bottled inside
Now it's time for me to take this to the next little step
And kill another muthafucka with my sick little spit
So go ahead,
Try and stop me
There aint nothin u can do but take a pussy shot at me
Take your rhyme....... Your rap
Put it in a sack
And leave this Ass Kickin mutha and don't eva come back.......................

well...i think your wack

Yo thanks G...

Very much...
wack...

Peep the...
tutorials...
maybe they...
can be of...
help...


What?...

yeh
elevate dawg
read a dictionary or somethin

HUH ????????????

not much better there, everone else was just a little harsh. the vocab was simple but the flow was okay. topic sucked cuz there really wasn't one. no one can say they spit 100% greatness so don't let it get you down. keep working and elevating to get where you need to be and do you. 1

YOU FALLOWED AN EMINEM FORMAT WHICH REQUIRES ALOT MORE VOCAB AND DIRECT HITS YOU DIDNT DELIVER THAT BUT IT WAS GOOD.

you 1 wack motha fucker this shit sucked

im with everyone else tha posted

/\wit a record of 0-3 so are u


no hate

LOL...i aint got a record..mainly cuz i dont bother battle...anyway...B-Squared...fuck you ya wack mudda fuck...give he kid a few months and hell take a record to 0-4

hey kid....read the dictionary...it doez wondaz...play with words to...jus keep at it....

lol, you show no talent and i dont even think you are supposed to rap, this is a FAD for you, you dont show 1 sign. and by da way all newbies have flow because dats all dey here and not the actual meanings of the sentences

Ya know what MUTHAFUCKAS that are tryin to be dissin
U tryin pissin on my back, well guess what your fuckin missin
I don't need U to tell me who is bad and whos good
I can tell by your records U aint nothin but old school, old news
Old fools, On the brink of whos who in a calssroom of
wit no tools
I can rip U apart wit a glims of my fuckin eye
U die, when U try to be me
MUTHAFUCKA YOUR MINE
Inside U be creatin a sign, to give up causes time
Your blind
I will KILL U with my rhyme
I would go on head to head wit this little chump whore
So I can change his fuckin record to


0-4

JUST WHEN I THOUGHT YOU WAS FINISHED YOU CAME BACK WIT SOME MORE WACK SHIT HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA MAYBE YA PRE TENSE BECAUSE BEFORE YOU STICK YA SWORD UP YA ASS YOU TENSE UP SO NOW I UNDERSTAND WHERE YOU GET YA NAME FROM/

WORD OF ADVISE TAKE UP SEWING

OK let me fuckin try this shit again cause u aint gettin the point