Sane vs HCabuser
 

okay. check in first.

rules:
10 lines max
no crew, hate, d/r votes
I spit first
due 30 mins after I spit

aight, this is my check in. I'll spit in a few. remember, you gotta check in................................................ .................................................. .....

aight im checked in and will spit sick after sane.............................................. .................................................. .......................

I’ma “murder this cat”, like I was “slaying kittens”/
Delete 9 lives, and take away your “pen and pad” cause your shits “pre-written”/
I put ya body in critical condition, red alert in ya nervous system/
“Rip out ya tounge” cause you “spit twice as bad”, as if “I split ‘em”/
My punches leave you “stunned and shocked”, like “voltage in your veins”/
My spits is flames on another level, you just an “amateur”, I spit “pro-pain”(propane)/
I spit to stop ticks, you spit to stiffen dicks/
My multiple hits “incarcerate your heart”, “stop your clock with frozen ticks”/
Causin “death in all directions”, “cardinal murder” with acidic rhymes/
“Lyrics quick” like “accelerated spits”, “double up”, beat your ass in “double time”/

uppin for HCabuser.......................................... ...............................................

^^^nice spit.........

good potential right therre.

good flow

good punches

good originality

overall good..........

i liked it........

waitin 4 the other kat...........

wen he enterz ill hit this up........

lets go HCabuser. don't duck out on this battle. I don't want a no show. LETS GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yeah i come a little late/
but i come with the answer to your fate/
get ready check ur posture/
my ryhmes are short but hurtfull/
punk you need to duck cause you about to get an ear full/
my insane reign has all got there guns aimed at point blank range
sane got a crush/
on saddam hussain/
lets go restricted/
tell this fool whose evicted

ummmmmmmm...........

Sane.......Yeah you took this with every fuckin aspect

Hey HC go check out the wackness emergency center....look for battling tips, and im not just sayin this to be a fag, im sayin it to help you elevate. It has great advice on how to do things. So check it out and elevate....

more votes please..............uppin for more.............................................. .........

HC needs hella elevation...work on usin betta punches..disseswere weak..no wordplay and flow was
terrible...yo!! you might be 0-10 before you get ya shit together..

sane had some good punches..a couple played lines
but he hit alright witt'em..disses were iight..good flow..potential he has

vote Sane

don't sleep on this battle, this is uppin number2!!!

anyways, please vote...just need 3 more!!!!!

uppin this.................I just need 2 more votes.............don't sleep on this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!