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Conclu$!ve v.s. Rappad
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No hate Votes No Crew Votes No d/r Votes yep...... And I am dropping first OH YEAH ONE MORE THING IF YOU QUOTE VOTES, THEY DO NOT COUNT VOTES MUST BE EXPLAINED IN ONE OF THE FOLLOWING FORMATS EITHER 1. punches- wordplay flow- vocab- Structure- Creativity- Multis- Metas- Opener- Finisher- OR 2. a line by line/bar by bar breakdown, with at least one line of commentary on each line ^^IF YOUR VOTE IS NOT IN ONE OF THESE FORMATS, IT DOES NOT COUNT!. and finally, good luck, and no beef |
When Is The Due Date???........................................... ...........
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well, i will be dropping within 20 minutes, so you gotta drop within half an hour after you see my drop
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Yea It'z Cool.............................................. .................................................. ........................
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Rip Ya Throat Out, Leave Ya Hollow In The Neck, Slam Your Head Into A Card Stack During A Poker Game And Make Yuo Really Hit The Deck/
So Don't Talk Shit When My Bullets Enter Chests, Nocturnal Death Will Make You Enter Rests, And It's Like This Bitch Works For A Credit Card Company, Cuz I already Lose Interest/ Your Voice Is Hypersonic, It Shatters Ear Lobes, I Spear Hoes, After I Drag This Queen He'll Be Sportin' Nothing But Queer Clothes!/ changin' it up a little I'm the fastest, you said yourself I'm the more sick emcee, I'll rip the the frees and I 'spit sick' like I got 'tongue disease' // Dude you aint gonna win with a 'keyed' verse cuz trust I 'changed da locks'// Man like bars the only time you gonna attack 'rough' is writin 'on da rocks'// See now conclusive having to find out the hard way, not to step when he shouldn't.// Cause your "Train" "Of Thought" is more like the "Little Engine That Couldn't!!!// You could "Shrink" me to a "Midget" But I'd still "Stand Above You"// I'll "Crush Your Chest", and "Take Out" your "Lungs" so you can witness a "Breath Taking View."// ^^k my comp is kinda messing up and keeps freezing and shit, so If I went over or too many lines just match them, if not, then just drop ur verse |
This nigga Rapped will get addresed wit gunz and get blown to "Bits and Pieces"
Then I'll have him trying to get his "Life Together" Like today was the second coming of jesus// Time after time,This wanna be thug slash hustler is only living a dream The only "Block" you seen, Came from the offensive line during a game of the wolverines// This pussy called "Hershey Thug" aint never sold "Crack" in the streets The closest to that, was being on a block with faggots spreading his "Ass Cheeks"// Running around threads talking greasy like Clusive wont upload them clips Like a "blind man having sex", This nigga Rapped has "No idea who he fucking wit"// I could tell u got a High School flow while mines is more like a sopmore in College Rapped if you ate the pages out the encyclopedia u still couldnt spit knowledge// My flow should be quarantined, cause im known as a hazard Like a impatient personal trainer I dont know why im wasting my time on this weak bastard// When speaking wit Clusive, Make sure that u own or possesing an automatic Or get youre face rocked more times then that Burberry fabric// 49 battles and you still "Aint Elevate" like an "Old Manz Erection" If this was "Audio" nobody would listen to ya shit even if it was aired on "Taxi Cab Confessions"///(show on HBO) You wouldnt type "Sick" shit if ya keyboard had the "Flu" Rapped you really think you gonna last in this battle?? you better off "Singing A Duet" with "Ja Rule"// The only time you "Hard" is when watch scenes from "Oz's Prison Showers" Ima leave right know I bet Rapped still get whippings for being online after hours// Uppin 4 Votes |
ok props to ya
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. punches-Rappad
wordplay-Both flow-Rappad vocab-Both Structure-Conclusive Creativity-Rappad Multis-Rappad Metas- Rappad Opener-Rappad Finisher-Conclusive Ovreal-Rappad This was a pretty good battle. Structure seems to be an issure with both of, shorten thme lines and get to the point. Good battle and keep elevating. POLL VOTE ON MY BATTLE WITH FLY: I will post the link in a second. |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79318
There is the link, please vote on that shit, thanks. |
Cant I Dont Got 100 Posts Yet......................
0-1 Rapped Uppin............................................. ...................... |
all of the above
wordplay vocab multis metas all rappad. no beef and could you both drop a vote in my battle against duper herb Vote gone. -Amby |
Thatz Not Enough Explanation 4 Me Can You Use Quotes Or Something???...................................... .................................................. .................................................. ..................
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that vote does not count....must be explained as stated in the rules, that is like quoting a vote, only by restating.
I will ask a mod to change it. Still 1-0 me READ THE RULES FOLKS!!!!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
1-0 uppin
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uppin...
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