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Sane vs Withersman
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RULES: 10 lines No crew, Hate, DR votes Withersman spits first |
checkin in......and you go first because you challeneged me so go first...................
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My styles arcane, it leaves rappers lame in the brain so they can’t spit straight/
My lyrics’ll plunder your thoughts, cause your “flow” is like “scared teen girls”, its to “late”!/ I “pillage vocab”, “destroy your bars” with my “verbal blitzkriegs”/ You could never “live up” to my “stand”ards, like I “chopped off this cats-legs”/ I spit the most “noxious” of flows, causing “virulent infections” to “exhaust” your “brainstream”/ Your “mind” is “running outta words”, cause you got “verbs sprinting outta ya dreams”/ I’ll “eat” you like “pawns” on a “chessboard”, “checkmate” your raps, cause I easily “Queen-this”/ Even if Withersman “jacked off his brain”, he still couldn’t have a “stroke of genius”/ My lyrical assault will “deplete ya stamina”, “take ya breath away” like I “tore out ya lungs”/ Withersman couldn’t be “hard on my level” if he used “ladders with viagra rungs”/ |
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damn sane that was some ill shit man.......hey man im from pahoa side man......i come back and drop a vote on this shit when the otha man spits
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wow cool...do you go to Pahoa? you got AIM...hit me up at audo324...
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where you at Withersman???
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yo my power just got back on I was hit by that hurricane. I'm startin my verse now..................................
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The iniquitous of my rhymes leave yours devouerd and minced//
your punches are baby steps while mine are vehemence// You call yourself Audo but you have no infrasonic lyrics// You probably get head from your dad just to raise up your spirit// your rhymes are to recitative do be in this rap game// actin all hard while in reality your a mediumistic mayn// look at this wannabe Canibus tryna spit big words// yea I'm doin the same, but I gotta get rid of this herb// Audo and Sane both the same emcees, thats what he does to feel better as the rector// Your leader needs two profiles just to up his record// you speakin that bullshit expose your deliberate nerd spectrum// Talkin about viagra, you probably wish you could fuck yourself in the rectum// |
sane took most of this..........
wordplay, punches flow but i think withersman took this on personals.... too bad i cant vote.... my vote would be sane |
sane...is just on another level then this cat....
Flow---ill say TIE Punches---sane wordplay---Sane vocab---Sane(almost to much) multis---none mettas---sane VOTE SANE ps....not so many quotes- |
withersman came weak, sane came nice, its that simple..
You probably get head from your dad just to raise up your spirit// this line threw me off^^ keep elevatin but sane took this hands down. |
Flow-Both
Pucnhes-Sane Multi-Sane Vocab-Sane Personals-Wither Overal-Sane Yep that verse was pretty good, nice overal flow and good punches, the vocab was like... wow. |
Forgot to drop this link, you can't edit in Front Lines.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80508 |
lol o well. I didnt take this battle seriously anyway.......................
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