APRENTICE vs WhiteNightMare
 

IIGht dawg
10 lines
no dr
no hate
u spit or w.e check in and well do it

both within 20min from now...............holla........................... .....................................

man wtf u need 20 mins 4 hurry up iight cuz im mad sick bout to play some madden 2 so hurry this shit up

BOTH SPITS YOURS TOO......and i dont prewrite like u sorry
..................................so 20min from now both spits...........

food for thought then thought for food your brian must be "starvin" watch as i take my mutha fuckin machette to this fagget and start "carvin"/

how u excpect to merk me wit dat weak ass "line" this kid should learn his numbers again cuz this mutha fucka still cant grip the "nine"/

nigga feel this gun ill pull the trigger then "clap and feel" i think im gettin ripped off cuz your one frie short of a happy "meal"/

this kid said he wasnt hungry when i said he had a big "eggo"(ego) im building my lyrical mansion when my rhymes connectin like "lego"/

this kid join rb and the site reached new "lows" this kid thinks hes a pimp because he got a "garden hoze"(hoes)

IIGHT FAggot lets go!!!! FIRE FIRE

Yo this thread, u never shoulda opened it, ya heart i got u holdin it/
Cuz ur punches hit to no avail, like spray on deodarant, ya failed newb, ur spits not yet potent/

this flight u might not BEAR, i leave ur face white, like FUCKEN White NIGHTMARES/
like interacial relationships to the klan, IM A WHITENIGHTMARE/

I leave u wit more men in black,(hes dead) then hinderin raps, that led to where ur funerals at/
Im tunin in these punches and slaps, to where u dont turn for more, like FUCKEN RUSTY TAPS/(hes done)

ya teeth got a LUSTY GAP, so how much dick u been devowerin/
Breakin through your ranks, and hoverin over your labyrinth/

tic toc the devil awaited, (YOU) he thinks hes home free "HEAVEN I MADE IT"/
now next time u peep my name bith u better evade it, but ur not bad at least ur name is creative!!!/

this battle was okay

whitenightmares disses remained only decent throughout the verses, nothing really special

Apprentice had some nice lines but somie lines he messed up on

this flight u might not BEAR, i leave ur face white, like FUCKEN White NIGHTMARES/
(shouldnt use "white" twice, you should prolly substitute the first "white" with "pale" or something, but it was good)

like interacial relationships to the klan, IM A WHITENIGHTMARE/
(nice personal, liked it, downfall [repetition of white nightmare twice in a consecutive bar])

other than it, his disses came stronger


VOte = App
hit dis up with an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81559

no need to give personal details so heres a breakdown-=

punches=ap
flow + structure=ap
wordplay=ap
origanality=little bit wkite
metas=ap
multis=ap
personals=ap
sustainment=ap.....he jus dissed all the way thru.....white would've except for the mansion line

vote=app

hit this up..............cheers...

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=81309

apprentice took it.......................his flows was way better..................its jus like that

apprentice won this like The other guy wasn't there


Vote= Apprentice

hit this up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81437

whitenightmare got merked apprentcie took every category except apprentice was a lil shaky on the flow but other then that he killed this shit my vote-apprentice

IIGHt yall lets get some more votes on this battle iight hit this up HONESTLY>>>>>>>.................................................. .....

This Battle Was Not That Good, But WhiteNightmare came out horrible so in that case apprentice came out a bit harder so he won with wordplay and a better flow

IIght ummm at least its feedback uppin for 1 more vote on this shit !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOLLA UPPINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN