Caedmon -v- CarsonJet
 

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normal rules apply
no feeding
no recycling
no biting
no cheap votes
1 hour limit.......
blind spits.........

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dope i
make it on my clock 6:25 so
ill drop in an hour...as long as u
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Caedmon

people....he said he doesnt suk....I took his werd(so sue me...)


ok......Here we go......
I spit at Mon' so wicked HBO labelled dis explicit'-
Lifted dis jet flo's solo while dis kid tries ta lip'it'-
Inject'n Cae wit visine'So he can veiw his weak lines'-
My punch'lines follow thru'no hollywood..no heinze'-

**Splitta**
Wanna be in a crew? face it ur a Coaster' u'll never get Draft'ed-
Way i spit an erase this kids traits u'd think my label warned of acid-

xpose'n this kid like rolla daytime kodak-
6 posts verse me make's dis thread'more like a throw-bak'
ain't got the patience...but i can make u one-
fuk guns....my slurs of verbs crush caedmon like a ton-

sorry i was workin on something hes a keystyle.....thanks

CJ Agreed To This Battle, Fool Don’t Know What It Will Cost Him,
This Celt Will Own You Like Ya Home Town Team of Boston.
Herb Uses Big Words In His Verse,But Skill…He Aint Got It,
Best Chance Of Him Right-In(Writing) Sick Wud Be If He Lied In Vomit.
Ya Text Is Homersexually Erotic, Due To The Fact Its Fucking Shit,
CJ Don’t Know About Being On The Ball In Rap…Only About Sucking It.
So wack it takes you 10 lines an hour, dogg that’s got to be a sin,
But Like Sports Fans Embracing Defeat-You Got No Chants(chance) of a win.
I Left This Kid Now Shook, Worse Than A Hand Of A Man Of Peace,
Removing Condoms Of Ya Dads Dick-Is Ya Best Chance Of A Rap Release.


if flows off i didnt wanna go over time

Herb Uses Big Words In His Verse,But Skill…He Aint Got It,
^^^
Read Rules....u agreed to no feeding.....

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Right here we go........

Carsonjet

I spit at Mon' so wicked HBO labelled dis explicit'-
Lifted dis jet flo's solo while dis kid tries ta lip'it'
^ not the best punchline ever

Inject'n Cae wit visine'So he can veiw his weak lines'-
My punch'lines follow thru'no hollywood..no heinze'-
^ weak

Wanna be in a crew? face it ur a Coaster' u'll never get Draft'ed-
Way i spit an erase this kids traits u'd think my label warned of acid-
^ this wass aiight

xpose'n this kid like rolla daytime kodak-
6 posts verse me make's dis thread'more like a throw-bak'
^ not feelin this

ain't got the patience...but i can make u one-
fuk guns....my slurs of verbs crush caedmon like a ton-
^ best line of em all, still not as good as ive seen you spit before

Caedmon

CJ Agreed To This Battle, Fool Don’t Know What It Will Cost Him,
This Celt Will Own You Like Ya Home Town Team of Boston.
^ an ok opener

Herb Uses Big Words In His Verse,But Skill…He Aint Got It,
Best Chance Of Him Right-In(Writing) Sick Wud Be If He Lied In Vomit
^ could be better if you worded it better

Ya Text Is Homersexually Erotic, Due To The Fact Its Fucking Shit,
CJ Don’t Know About Being On The Ball In Rap…Only About Sucking It.
^ very nice punch

So wack it takes you 10 lines an hour, dogg that’s got to be a sin,
But Like Sports Fans Embracing Defeat-You Got No Chants(chance) of a win.
^ very nice too

I Left This Kid Now Shook, Worse Than A Hand Of A Man Of Peace,
Removing Condoms Of Ya Dads Dick-Is Ya Best Chance Of A Rap Release.
^ ouch nice finisher


VOTE- well Carson i think you came very weak Ive seen alot better and i dunno whether theres somethin wrong or you underestimated this kid but he deserves my vote because his verse was better than yours. It lacked punches, wordpaly etc. n when it did you couldnt really hit em hard enough so it has to be Caedmon because you had some nice lines in there jus keep elavatin man you show potential and you thouroughly deserve my vote

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Way i spit an erase this kids traits u'd think my label warned of acid-


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Vote-Carson

Carson was way better

The newb was basic, no punchlines, no metas or similes, no multies, basic vocab, just elivate dude

This was a landslide

Vote-Carson

Yo carson can u hit this up, thanks man

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83338

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jet o this in every sub-ject and that otha cat might be a biter.

Vote:carson jet..............damn rule.....................