K-Dubb vs. DaMoon (real battle)
 

my bad on da first one
10-20 linez max
5 wins 3 KO
no crew/hatin votes
no bitin
u spit first

get at me

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83736

YO DA MOON HIT THIS UP DAWG AN ILL VOTE ON THS
AFter WHen u all drop
pc

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Remember no hatin votes

aight then....................lets get it crackin...........................waitin on u to spit....................
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Here comes tha rhyme imma give to you,
make sure ya read it all tha way through//
Hey did ya know your a baboon, ya goon,
ima send ya to tha Moon, in a fuckin hot air baloon,
and all tha aliens will say hi to this cartoon aka DaMoon.//
Ya just tryin ta be an imitation of god's creation in this mutha fuckin nation, with no limitation.....
hey dumbfuck...You're not even an imagination!//
I don't know how you came to be, but im sure god is pretty so-rry that your gonna be, a part of hist-ory, man can't ya see that ya cant be me?//
No wonder your called Da Dirty, your mom gave ya a herpe,
she said you was jerky and tasted like turkey, now aint that perky? No.......it was fuckin quirky//
Isn't it fun gettin spit on, when ya know ya haven't won, and ya aint havin no fun?
Betta run, I have a gun! *BOOM*
Only 3 lines ta go, here imma give you a bat and you can gimme ya best blow,
how bout you just stick it up your ass hole and not let go?//

i brush through these verses using heavy lyrical tactics
well not with this nigga, hell this aint even practice
u aint on my level hoe yo my pedistle is higher
put a match to ya tounge and u still wouldnt spit fire
u a joke ''I have a gun" u say oh u must be real hard
especially coming from a prep bitch like u straight outta Sunset Blvd. (were hes from)
who needs a gat to off you I'll jus do it wit these metaphors
you a pussy whose flow couldnt compare to $2 wetter whores
fuck 20 lines on this verse i could stop now or murder u quick
K-Dubb means o''K'' im ready for ''Dubb"le dick
see u bout as fucked up and twisted as wearin Roc-A-Hoe or BuFu
u a faggot i bet Rosie O'Donnel gets more pussy than u do
if u were gone no one would miss u face it dawg u are nothing
wit da 9 in ya face yo dumb-ass would still think im bluffin
so there u go nigga heres ya first loss i understand u startin to pout
your cookies have jus been cleared and u aint even logged out

yo my bad it took so long but my computer has been off line for da last few days....But anyway, waitin on votes///////////////////
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uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin
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yo c'mon folks sombody check out da battle so we can put this away aight...........................
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aight ima say da moon took this, heres my breakdown.....

structure-tie
flow-tie
vocab-tie
wordplay-da moon
punches-da moon
personals-da moon
overall-da moon

props to the both of ya, but ima say da moon took this.

peace......

Da Moon Merked this man str8 up, 1 sided battle in my opinion, K-Dubb U need to do some serious elevatin Cuz
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Vote = DM

This is what i think...
Flow =Da moon
Punches =Da moon
Originality =Da moon
Overall Vote= Da moon

K-dubb your verse was crap.. needa do betta than that if u expect wins..

Yo hit up this link n vote on it... post your links n we will do the same...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84008

aight I think da moon took this shit easily K-dubb what was that shit it started off as a weak battle then it looked like it was getting better then it just ran into a whole bunch of long fucking lines that didnt make sense and had no punches you should try to keep it more direct and straight to the point no h8 thats just my opinion da moon your shit was pretty good direct to the point and had some nice punches the only other thing is that both openers closers were real fucking weak


hit these up and give honest votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83318
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82941

aight then fair enuff.....but still waitin on more votes......les gon and end this.......
still uppin for more votes

especially coming from a prep bitch like u straight outta Sunset Blvd. (were hes from)
who needs a gat to off you I'll jus do it wit these metaphors

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damn that was the only attempted personal that stood out

decent battle from both overall damoon grabbed
it
please pay back the faovr on hazy vs merkury

PLEASE!