SwiF'][' Vs triple_X
 

RULES
*u spit 1st
10 lines
*no crew
no hate
*no dr

Hey i'll vote on this battle once it's been done but in the meantime check this out will ya:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84407

I'm just tryin to get that done with. Sorry to interupt

10 lines kid no more no less

You have no originality I mean 'Triple X'? 'Get off Vin Deisels Balls'
Facin me is 'Suicide', like Ridin in Woodin Barrels down Niagra Falls
I'll 'Scratch ya surface' and 'Crack U' so I ruin your flow of 'Record'
Beat me U 'wouldnt Know where to Start', Like 'Races n' no Flags wit Checkards
Ur a 'Clown on a minature Tricycle' your performance is 'Very Small'
And your Ego is a 'Load of Shit' like 'High School Bathroom Stalls'
Your 'Attempt' 2 get me is 'Poor' like Proposing with no Engagement Ring
I know ur proud of ya Zero Loss's record, but what about beatin 'Condom King'?
For this 'Homo' every 'gay annual perade' would Be-A-Celebration
Ur flow sucks and wouldnt 'Be on Track' if you took Re-A-Bilatation

Damn Hurry Up................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ............

Let me know if your no showing fag and I'll ask for this to be closed

PUSSY............................................. ......

i'll spit within tha next hour chill wit the freepostin
.................................................. ..............................

You never Stick to the Point cuz u Debated Gently created the rules densley//
to Take Swift Out of his Class Like a Belated School Assembly//
This Kid Cheers for the Tie! when I Chase his Worries so he Fears He'll Die//
I'll shove ya Funny Bone in ya Retinas and really Bring Tears to your Eyes//
I send Multiple Shots in your Tissues that Prove Your Statements arent Yours like kids Crammin for Test Subjects//
It's clear that X is Givin ya Death when X is Fuckin Piss on Your Life like a Damn Sperm Fertility Test//
I'll fuckin Beat ya Lines cuz like Skippin Haloween Festivals I make you Miss Treat your Mind//
Battlin X You at the End of the Road like a fuckin Street Sign//
Noone Pays Tribute to your life ike an Unknown Burial Ceremony//
this Nigga said "Checkards" when it come to rappin u no he's a fony//

Not Bad
LIked the line bout the Funny Bone

Uppin............................................. ...........................

aight i think that swift takes this, heres my breakdown...

structure-tie
flow-tie
vocab-triple
wordplay-swift
punches-swift
personals-swift
overall-swift

props to the both of ya, but ima say swift takes this.

peace......

You have no originality I mean 'Triple X'? 'Get off Vin Deisels Balls'
Facin me is 'Suicide', like Ridin in Woodin Barrels down Niagra Falls
^^nice
I'll 'Scratch ya surface' and 'Crack U' so I ruin your flow of 'Record'
Beat me U 'wouldnt Know where to Start', Like 'Races n' no Flags wit Checkards
^^kinda weak
Ur a 'Clown on a minature Tricycle' your performance is 'Very Small'
And your Ego is a 'Load of Shit' like 'High School Bathroom Stalls'
^^OK
Your 'Attempt' 2 get me is 'Poor' like Proposing with no Engagement Ring
I know ur proud of ya Zero Loss's record, but what about beatin 'Condom King'?
^^nice

For this 'Homo' every 'gay annual perade' would Be-A-Celebration
Ur flow sucks and wouldnt 'Be on Track' if you took Re-A-Bilatation
^^weak
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------

You never Stick to the Point cuz u Debated Gently created the rules densley//
to Take Swift Out of his Class Like a Belated School Assembly//
^^Nice

This Kid Cheers for the Tie! when I Chase his Worries so he Fears He'll Die//
I'll shove ya Funny Bone in ya Retinas and really Bring Tears to your Eyes//
^sick

I send Multiple Shots in your Tissues that Prove Your Statements arent Yours like kids Crammin for Test Subjects//
It's clear that X is Givin ya Death when X is Fuckin Piss on Your Life like a Damn Sperm Fertility Test//
^^nice

I'll fuckin Beat ya Lines cuz like Skippin Haloween Festivals I make you Miss Treat your Mind//
Battlin X You at the End of the Road like a fuckin Street Sign//
^^nice

Noone Pays Tribute to your life ike an Unknown Burial Ceremony//
this Nigga said "Checkards" when it come to rappin u no he's a fony//
^^OK


Vote:X i was feelin his more and he had better punches!!!

i gotta go wit watts X got this his disses was ill and so was everything else.............................................. .........

swift ur punches seem a tad bit forced but overall u spitted tight it's juss he had tha better verse..........................................

LOLOL


Uppin............................................. ..........................Gotaloveforap u forgot to poll

y u laughin swift stupid dis was close as fuck

lemme tear dis shit down for ya'll

flow.swoft
punches.both
vocab.xxx
metas.swift
similes.swift
i enjoyed.xxx

dis was close as FUCK

but ima half ta go with swift

pizzle niggaz keep da good work uP

Uppin this shit.............................................. .................................................. ...................................

agree wit cannibal close as fuck but goes to swiff

better punches
more creative
and smoother flow