corrupted_mc Vs Spit4One
 

got it now

oh k i'll spit first i'm keyin my verse now............................................... ............................................

sit your ass down, you're too quick to get off/
i'll chew you up, and spit you out like i got whooping cough/
you a stupid ass nigga think the rhymes you spit are hot, /
i'm spittn advice to you, grab and pen and paper, prepare to jot/
you insist you have style, which honestly, you lack/
in denial like an albino, who insists' that he's black/
get it straight son, you're suppossed to be hittn on the ladies/
you're confused, like R. Kelly, cause you're bashn on babies/
but I don't blame you son, cause I know you're wack/
like a tired man, dawg, you've been hitting the sack/ (balls)
i'mma punch you in the eye, leave it corrupted for all to see/
assume your favorite position, down on both knees

I'm a wamcer for life i'll strife and slice u with a knife, dice you up and let you be, your no fuckin "g", plz i'll take u on a lyrical ride smashing all of your pride slide up and kill you off after this all u gonna do u cough, choke thats all ur ass is gonna do when i'm done with you, you gonna be stunded and stuck in glue leave u dazed and confused like a newbe thats what u are to me ur shit is so whack u make me yawn u ain't nuttin but a pawn in the rap game i'll leave u in a lyrical phase

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Complete annihilation by Spit...

He had every catagory cept Multi's...

I'll give that to Corrupted.

Good closer, nice "albino" line.

Stop using R. Kelly disses, though...

They're played like Monopoly.

Aside from that, nice work, peeps...

Work on ya shit some, C...especially format.

Peace

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spit4one took this wit ease. corrupted u need to work on yo structure and yo vocab before u start battlin cats. spit had better structure, flow, wordplay, and punches.

my vote=spit4one

uppin~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~come on...three votes and this is done..let's go

you insist you have style, which honestly, you lack/
in denial like an albino, who insists' that he's black/
^ LoL That One Got Me Chuckling 4 a sec
get it straight son, you're suppossed to be hittn on the ladies/
you're confused, like R. Kelly, cause you're bashn on babies/
^ Now Thats What I Call A Good Bar! (in this battle)

corrupted_mc umm u might wanna get soem help......
u can do better

vote= spit4one

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topic: Spit4one vs corrupted

intro: they both wanted to battle so they set it up

body: they posted their shit

conclusion: spit4one beat the shit out of corrupted

thats my paper on spit4one vs corrupted (applause)

nah, that was lame but spit4one got this

hey ya'll vote for some of my battles Pacaso mac vs. Rob D

good spit by spit4one.....gotta say he took it....nice show....better than your other post, that was wack.

Spit took this no doubt. Weak battle but Spit's verse was better. Corrupted MC you got alot of elevating to do. Both of you stay active and keep posting verses you'll improve.

Now ANYBODY reading this please vote on this it's getting slept on-

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86384

Thanks DS