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SmokaJoka. 10-18-03 01:47 AM

SmokaJoka666 vs. An']['hropoLog¥
 
10 lines max
no dickryde/hate/bias/crew votes
votes must be explained or it doesn't count (breakdowns and whatnot)
due date is tomorrow by midnight

peace
4:20

An']['hropoLog¥ 10-18-03 01:00 PM

Eh Joker you wanna do this Now?

Are u guna spit soon cuz Im ready............................................. .............................................

SmokaJoka. 10-18-03 01:08 PM

^lol it's Sat. my friend...busy busy....i will drop tonight but if ur ready go ahead cuz i'm out for the rest of the day until later tonight.....aight

peace
4:20

An']['hropoLog¥ 10-18-03 01:27 PM

I'll spit 16 lines max right now, that cool? Since im doin this fast for you............

Ur capabilities are very Poor like delivered Savers For Pennies
Expecting to Smoke Me? Thats why You leave Posts wit 4:20
This Evening you'll Crumble, like Uncarefull Stock Brokers
Set out to Fuck Me Up, you must realy be a Cock Joker
Ur still a herb 'Incomplete', like a 'Rocky Whore Picture wit out Thongs'
Wordplay makes no sence, If u were God U wouldnt no right frum Wrong
This battles like Rock vs Siccor, Smoka just doesnt Cut-IT
His Talents like the Stock market crash, Each Line is Low Budget
Im Oil, Your Water, Im always On top of you When We Mix
Spittin 'Heats' out of the Quesion Ur like a dog thats been 'Fixed'
You'd still have 'Run On' sentences in a car that keeps 'Stallin'
If u lived up in 'Canada' wit me, Youd be Excelent at 'Snow-Ballin'
If you win it is 'Mear Luck' like rolling two Casino 'Dices'
Smoka Couldnt add 'Taste to his shit' wit sliced Organic 'Spices'
Your Wordplays to Sloppy for anyone to Get Or Remember
As 4 Punchlines U have A few, Less than I.J.L Crew Members (his small crew)

An']['hropoLog¥ 10-18-03 09:42 PM

lets go Smoka JOka.............................................. .................................................. .........

SmokaJoka. 10-18-03 10:18 PM

bout' 10:20 here....not late don't rush me....

If U Don't Get It, Do Us A Favor And Don't Vote

Battle Me?? Kid Named Himself From 10th Grade Biology Bitch U Should Be Sorry//
I'll Take The 2nd To 6th Letters In Ur Name For Ur Wack Rhymes, N Thro Apologies//(a-nthro-pology)
For Bein Wack, My Punches Are Hittin Ur Teeth More Than Tobacco Stained Plaque//
I'll Throw A 'Spine At U Tied To A Foot' To Hint That U Should 'Step Back'//
Kid Changed His Name When He Realised He Couldn't Run A One Man Mob//(aka MOB)
Face It, Ur Taken For 'Granite' (granted) I Guess That's Y U Think Ur Rhymes 'Rock'//
I'll Make U Mocked, U Wouldn't Have Dope Spits If Ur Saliva Smoked Pot//
U Remind Me Of A 300 Pound Woman, Cuz This Bitch Ain't Never Been On Top//
I'll Slap U In Circles Around A Wristwatch To Show I'm Beatin U Around The Clock//
U Can't Diss Me, Ur Lyrics Are Like Inaccurate Racers They Just Miss-lead//
This 'Pussys Shitting' On Rap If He 'Sparked A Flow' He’d Have A 'Poo-Tang'//
Ur Rhymes Are Flawed, No Vocabularie (<lmao) And Wordplay Are Two Things//
Ur Rhymes Are Cheap, Like Blind Men On A 'Waitin List' For Eyes, It's Time To See//
U Couldnt Catch A Win If U Hunted For 'Mighty Ducks' And Coach Calls The 'Flying V'//
U Ain't Elevated, My Punches Are Destroyin U, Caught U Off Guard Cuz U Hesitated//
U A Bitch, Let Feds Outline Ur Body's Final Position With Ur Vaginal Region Shaded//

peace
4:20

SmokaJoka. 10-18-03 10:29 PM

uppin number one.....nice battle Anthro....this should be pretty close............................................. .....................................

peace
4:20

-ElocuShun- 10-18-03 10:48 PM

very very nice battle......................i havent seen alot of ya'll cats work but both pieces were hard and straight to the point.......lotta personals impressed me a lot...anyways away from the big ups here the breakdown=
punches=........jus..i mean jus ....Smoka...tight
flow=both...different styles but worked
metas=Anthropology....good comparisons
personals=Anth......liked the 4:20 line
creativity=smoka
originality=smoka......felt it more
wordplay=tie..nice
vocab=tie
overall=Smoka.....his punches jus made that little bit of difference
pz


make sure ya'll hit this up plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86383

SmokaJoka. 10-18-03 10:55 PM

coo....appreciate a well explained vote...hopefully there will be more of those.......

peace
4:20

-ElocuShun- 10-18-03 11:04 PM

well can one of ya'll cats do the same on the battle thread i posted......................that was one of the things ya hated smoka.....peeps not lookin at ya threads......lol.........jus playin.....jus chek it out peeps^^^^^^^^6

e.coli 10-18-03 11:21 PM

yo this was a tight battle

flow=tie.......both verses were hard
punches=smoka.......barely.......it was close
personals=tie.........to close to call.................
creativity=smoka...........again very close...........
structure=tie
metas=antro
vocab=tie

my vote=smoka.................hell of a battle big ups to both of yall. this was some good shit

please hit this wit a honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85999

nice battle both of u

SmokaJoka. 10-18-03 11:26 PM

feeling respected to an extent again....:( brings a tear to my eye....lmao....uppin number 2

peace
4:20

spitit 10-18-03 11:32 PM

Fucking Nice Battle

punches..........both
metaphors...........anthro
wordplay............j
similes................both
personals............both
flow..............anthro
vocab.............j
complexity............j

j takes this because he had a much more complex verse, mad wordplay

I know i cant vote, but J please hit this up honestly......

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86394

SmokaJoka. 10-18-03 11:54 PM

uppin number 3................................................. ...........................................

peace
4:20

Dirty Sally 10-19-03 12:06 AM

Whoa that was a good battle, both of you came strong. I'm voting thoroughly here both you did good.

Wordplay- both have good wordplay Smoka was a little more clever and complex

Punches- both threw good punches I'm 50/50 on this one

Metaphors- both of you shined with these but Smoka's was just a little more sicker

Multies- I'm 50/50 on this one also you both did well

Personals- I'm 50/50 on this also you guys came ill with the disses

Flow- An']['hropology flowed just a little bit nicer

Structure- Both verses are well structured, you both started off good and finished hard. Props to both you

You both brang it hard and were creative as hell. You guys went all out this is how battles should be. There's too many half assed verses here and it's good to finally see a real battle.

My vote goes to SmokaJoka666 due to his worplay and use of metaphors.

Return the favor both of you okay vote on this battle please-

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=threadid=86384

Thanks DS


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