Axe E. Umm vs Feeble Minded
 

hey. 14 lines max, you go first .
I'll be back on later to see if u checked in if u dont now.
so spit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Check... I'll Drop When I Get Home Or So.
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Start This Off With A Feeble Diss To Prove, I Don’t Think Much Of You.
Axe Is Better Then Few? You’re The One That’s Reppin’ An Herb Crew!
Shove A COMedian Up His Ass, Cuz Feeble’s Crews Are The Butt Of Jokes.
Fucka Wasted Punchline, Beat Feeble With Gimics, Th-Th-Th-That’s All Folks.
Push Feeble And His Verse Left And Right To Speak With All Jokes Aside.
Rip Out Your Secret Inside, Then Type Multicolored To Expose Your Gay Pride.
Real Feeble In, To Finish Him Off, Cuz I Got Him Hooked… On Phonics.
I Would Take A Shot At Your Manhood, But Thieves Already Busted On It.
Feeble’s Dope, I Ain’t A Match. *cough, cough* Harsh Lies, That’s Enough.
^And I’m Not Just Pullin’ Your Leg Feeb’s… I’m Fuckin’ Rippin’ It Off.

Yea... Fridays Are The Only Days I Really Have Time To Key. Match Me Or Whatever.

battle you.. its what i hope to do, leave ya roped & bruised
rb tried to get rid of the wackness.. simply by choking you
im furious, axe e. umm sucks, fuck what ya story is -
all ya sig did was make B.I.G... a little less notorious
im not getting mocked.. axe, its you who's getting stopped
& its a turnaround.. when the axe is getting chopped
make amends, his sigs been on B.I.G's dick for days on end
u changed ya name from amby to AXE.. cuz u like to get sprayed on men
fake ya threads, im making trends - ya as wack as some
& ya names about the worst wordplay ever.. for axiom
if thats not enough, i'll block ya pride.. w/ cinder fists
this battles goin on D/L for u.. like baseballs injured list

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this one is gonna take breakin down, cuz honestly at this point I'm not sure who won. Although i'm leanin towards feeble... so i'm gonna break this down line by line on 10 point scale here we go...

AXE
Start This Off With A Feeble Diss To Prove, I Don’t Think Much Of You.
Axe Is Better Then Few? You’re The One That’s Reppin’ An Herb Crew! eh... 1-10: 4 weak punch, shoulda made it creative insteada just sayin it
Shove A COMedian Up His Ass, Cuz Feeble’s Crews Are The Butt Of Jokes.
Fucka Wasted Punchline, Beat Feeble With Gimics, Th-Th-Th-That’s All Folks. lol, dat was ight, 1-10: 7 cuz the set-up was whack...
Push Feeble And His Verse Left And Right To Speak With All Jokes Aside.
Rip Out Your Secret Inside, Then Type Multicolored To Expose Your Gay Pride. eh... gimic, n gotta find anotha way to call him gay... 4
Real Feeble In, To Finish Him Off, Cuz I Got Him Hooked… On Phonics.
I Would Take A Shot At Your Manhood, But Thieves Already Busted On It. lol, 7
Feeble’s Dope, I Ain’t A Match. *cough, cough* Harsh Lies, That’s Enough.
^And I’m Not Just Pullin’ Your Leg Feeb’s… I’m Fuckin’ Rippin’ It Off. eh...7

Overall your set-ups are eh, need to be more creative with the disses, too.

FEEBS
battle you.. its what i hope to do, leave ya roped & bruised
rb tried to get rid of the wackness.. simply by choking you
lol, not bad, 8
im furious, axe e. umm sucks, fuck what ya story is -
all ya sig did was make B.I.G... a little less notorious
nice, 8
im not getting mocked.. axe, its you who's getting stopped
& its a turnaround.. when the axe is getting chopped
damn... dat was ight yo, good wordplay nice setup - 9
make amends, his sigs been on B.I.G's dick for days on end
u changed ya name from amby to AXE.. cuz u like to get sprayed on men whack, 6
fake ya threads, im making trends - ya as wack as some
& ya names about the worst wordplay ever.. for axiom
eh...ight, 6
if thats not enough, i'll block ya pride.. w/ cinder fists
this battles goin on D/L for u.. like baseballs injured list
7

ok... let's add up the difference here...

AXE: 50 - 29 = 21
Feebs: 60 - 44 = 16

Feebs get's the vote. Axe didnt come how he usually does and Feebs has elevated. Seemed like axe was on some serious writer's block. You're going to have to edit the poll, for some reason I can't poll vote.

vote - Feebs

oh yea, U guys need to peep my battle with CAPCOM it's gettin heavily slept on n should be closed by now.

thanx for voting .
upping for more more fair voters .
must be in elite list to vote obviously .

the text... is too short...

^no one cares .

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flow=feeble
punches=feeble
structure=feeble
creativity=axe
personals=feeble
overall=feeble

i think feeble pretty much merked this cat axe---he dropped sum good punches that were kinda witty--and thats why he gets my vote--not sure if i can poll---but we'll see

nah i can't poll soooooooooo how do i get to poll in this forum?
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You're Not Elite Hoe... Go Away
-Axe

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Gotta give props to both, really do...

But this battle goes to Feeble.

Both had great creativity, wordplay, and flow...

But the punches just came soft from Axe, not at all from Feeble.

The "Makin BIG a little less notorious" line just killed this battle.

Punches: Feeble
Wordplay: Feeble (by just a bit)
Personals: Feeble

That's really the tale here...

Sorry, Axe/Amby...

He just came harder...

Peace and Holla...

Born vs. Suicide backwords