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dom-N8 v.s. Forshadower
10 lines max
due at 6 pm eastern, if you miss deadline by a couple of minutes its cool, but don't post too late.... no bullshit votes |
how longs that from now forshadower, I'm in a different time zone.............................................. .........................................?
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in half an hour from no roughly...
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1/2 hours cool.............................................. ...........
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if you do not get something, do not vote
You beating the unbeatable is a hyperbole...da kind to 'spit' elevated action 'high verb_ally'/ I'll take you to rhyme in Harlem just so you can spit at me 'Apollo_getically'!/ U winning? highly unlikely...you're wack....even your lyrics told me/ Face it, you couldn't even be a graphic rappa if you wrote ya shit in Adobe!/ I'ma put this joke under more heat than Nyphomaniac_Dog_Breeders.. Then steal ya life like Kleptomaniac_Palm_Readers! . . . 6 lines doubt that I'll need any more...good luck |
Yo look,
My verbal ammo will ‘e clips’ ya cos I’m wiping out this ‘shadow’ like I’m the sunset, Like a dyslexic you confussed & beatin by my first words & I ain’t even warmed up yet/ You’re like a kamikaze pilot you go to battle & end up dead wiv my verbal shrapnel in ya head, Ya need a ‘lyric-proof-vest’ to stop you from lying in a liquid that’s red soaking the sheets of ya death bed/ I’m just sparring, this ‘shadow boxing’ is too easy cos I punch hard but the ‘forshadower’ never hits back, Feel the cold as ya record goes below zero, you tried, you froze comments on ya rhyme will mainly read ‘wack’/ Ya verses are so rough & incomprehensible - shit I thought I was reading Braille, Blind men voting is ya only hope of winning this, I’m hittin ya like a wife beater hits a female/ I took this forshadower ‘bitch n slapped’ her on the the ‘front lines’ for the whole world wide web to see, When ya peeps ask ya about this battle you tell them - ‘'I got ‘dom-N8’d’ & merked embarrassingly’’/ |
uppin for votes peeps............................................. ...
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hmm....I underestimated you a bit........but w/e vote honestly folks.......
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yo i think dom won that battle
cant vote just free postin this shit check out my battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=rhythm 1 |
this battle was pretty even in my opinon..............but domin8s wordplay put him on top of this battle......................my vote=domn8.............no hate foreshadower u had a good verse too but it just wasnt enough
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Hmmmm
Punches.........rappad Flow...............rappd Structure........Niether Personal.........Dom Similes............rappad Comparisons....Rappad Vocabulary........rappad creativity...........rappad vote................rappad D's verse seemedc played and basic, no hate juststatin the truth |
Thorn why you talkin bout 'rappad' he aint even in this battle????
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mods this poll is fucked up, i got 2 votes for me & 1 against me for someone who aint even in this battle. My score's been altered from 2-0 to 1-1????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????/
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