Thorn VS Deva
 

Im spittin in 15 minutes
Spit Within An hour or be DQ'd
I spit first Tho

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Chekc.......................

k man, ima checkin in,.................
....................i'll check ya battle after ours aight.....peace

Slower Than Snails, You couldnt Do this Blind Feeling Brail
Your Dilvery's So Slow It's Practically Post Office Mail
Hail To This Crown, I'll Drown Ya Mind Like Surround Sound
Profound Spits Will Pound This Clit, Ya lost Like Homeward Bound
About to Encounter a Loss Like Teen Abortion Occurance
This Deva makes me Sicker than No Health Insurance
Blockin ya Spits like Shower Curtains And Dams Made by Beavers
I got this battle Hands Down Like School class Under Achievers
Sniff Coke cuz you Blow, Gettin Rid of u Faster than Tickets Front Row
Like Pimps Arguein wit Prostitutes Im gettin Tired of Battlin this Hoe
I wont Win this in a Rude Manner, Ya lines aint Fat so I wont Stare
Witnessing you lose is Expected Kid, Like Dykes with Short Hair
Block Ya Shots Like Bullet Proof Lead, Ur dead like Undecover Feds
Its Said, You Suck like Teeth Scraping and Given some Bad Head
U'll Fail, Like Sluts Taking Sexualy Transmitted Disease Tests
Me and Deva wouldnt Read the Same if this was a Case of Incest
With In this Fake Deva Bitch Is more Shit than Popped Zits
Ya Lines are Fertalizer, thats Why Your Interests are Good Shit (Profile)
Your 23 On RB, Ya More Pathetic than Guys Using Sex Toys
Girl U cant win this Game, Its like Musical Chairs With Hemroids

Spit

The First thing a bring is I used to work for british mail,//
I got the fastest delivery for beating thorn the fucking snail//
Secondly I suggest you learn to read brail, I already did//
To read in between the lines “gonna break this wooden kid"//(thorns r made of wood)
Why you poppin at my interests smile at my profile//
According to yours you’re a no one which goes well with your style//
Don’t bring coke into it, been smokin it before you were born//
Compared to it your like the come down crashed out on the lorn//
I heard of burdens, but you’re the thorn in my side//
Luckily I got the antiseptic, numb what you try to imply//
Fuck the thorn ima gonna take the whole branch//
Leave this kid pricked bleeding rhymes through his own lance (lance a spelk)//
Dunno bout reapers but I’ll harvest ya rhymes//
From lowest ranking to ace of spades, I’ll bust all ya lines//
Thinkin he be a vet stacking and racking up double my posts//
Better make the most, ima leave him transparent like a ghost//
Closing the battle and to yall thinkin ima gonna fall//
Remember that a thorn’s a spike used by fags, lets kill them all//………

was feedin allowed in this?
anyways i find that to be a negative
breakdown=
punches=thorn
flow=both
sustainment=thorn
metas=thorn
laugh factor=thorn
vocab=both
overall=thorn
i dont like feedin at all.......thats it

MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT UP THE BATTLE IN MA SIG...VS 2 TYMA

punches-thorn
flow-tie
vocab-tie
metas-thorn
VOTE:THorn....ayo drop some honest votes on tha battles in my sig plz thanx

yeah the feeding was bad in here on the deva's part i would like to know anyway deva just askin outta curisosity guy or girl/ which are u no jokes bein made just wanna know but over all thorn to this

im a fucking guy, the name was N.D.eva. but i got banned so lost the N...so now ima just Deva, NOT Deeva, aight....

punches - thorn
flow- both
metas- thorn
vocab - tie
overall- thorn
my vote - thorn

and yea deva.... are u a guy or a girl , no joke

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Thorn had FAR better punches, creativity, and metas..... the flow was kinda even but the shit that Deva was spittin didnt even compete with Thorns lyrics....

Vote: Thorn

Mods I cant poll so please add

yo thorn took that battle wit eas. he had much harder punches, his flow good, he had tons of metas[almost in every line], he had better structure, and mad me laugh. thorn defenitly took this battle. Deva... ur rap was good... i just thought thorns was better and had more of those things i just said.

nice battle by both of u.......

but my overall vote is thorn

mods- everytime i go to poll it says i didnt post an explanation for my vote. when i did post an explaination....twice. when i asked someone for help they said to make your explaination longer... and i did that and it still didnt work. my explanation for my vote was longer than Brixton's and he still could poll. so if u can add my vote for thorn... and help me out

Decent Battle Here.. But Thorn Takes It With Much Better Verse.. Bath Came Kinda Iffy... But Thorn Had The Better Verse.

Good battle............................. I'll be able to poll soon.............................................. .................................................. .....................