Explict VS. MoF
 

yo lets battle.....

the rulz are known...

up to 16 lines.....
ima spit first...probably at the weekend cuz of too much work...

no dickridin, hate votes.......u all know it....

check in if u´re ready...

g´d luck.....peace!

aiight im down spit ya verse..i'll spit my shit after u..

Checkin in................................................

aight checkin in.....

i try to spit today.....if i cant manage it ima do this tomorrow....

peace!

ok....................

just remember that im spitin right after you do......hurry up and drop.............................................. ...

PZ

okay here is my shit......

yo Explict 0:2 fag u get smacked on the floor and ill jump on yo back//
i dont need alota lines to battle u, ima hunt u wit verses till u flag//
yo shits wack, sorry for beein so honest but ur rhymes just do lag//
i got hot verses made to burn down yo shak, i heat the floor cuz i expect//
after this battle u got to sit down and then ull have a burned sack//
people offer me crack just to get a fuckin copy of my rhymebook //
i dont need that shit cuz even without a drug my enemies get cooked//
first look, sook u saw that im good u should have escaped ducked//
too late, u get fucked.....u missin sumthin......its yo soul i took //
bitch u got shook but perhaps u find wack emcees to get a win good luck!//

u like to battle with kidergarden verses and i can tell u they suck//
my rhymz are made to mug fake emcees like u and i struck//
dont make yo shit public wit it u get plucked and fucked quick chic//
my performance was slick, yo head´s the drum and my verses the drumstick//


peace!

With these two lips I shear to death this MoF pansy only bitches
Leave ya sliced in two in waiting rooms demanding urgent stiches//
I shatter all hope with sharp wits that slits your wrists
As you battle more post beaten by bloody fists//
Like evangelists your shattered heart turns quick to God
As he looks down and laughs takes his staff and burns your tattered bod//
Now ablaze your amazement is short and you tune fast to me
I outlast most who pass by me with rhymes past blasphomy//
My text comes through bolder,I crush your chest when I rock
so nigga dont test my block//
Sparkin thought and smokin spits used to lapse and choke you//
You come for attack packin less heat then artic snow caps
Blowin raps through your ass crack cuz you flow crap//
Walk on you and your life flashes in crossed signs
You droolin due to brain damage,you Blowin spit bubbles like you a soap dish
Your ass is fuckin weak and you STILL attempt to throw this//
Insisting your flows are crazy,but I'll show where to stick your verse
leave ya ass walkn cuz i just steped all up on ya herse//

uppin (1) for some votes on this battle////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

yo i'll hit it up n a minute
decent battle so far
check out some of my battles
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96

mof
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yo explict 0:2 fag u get smacked on the floor and i'll jump on yo back
i dont need a lota lines 2 battle u, ima hunt u wit verses till u flag
^this was ok-i'm sure it would sound better in audio
the first line dont flow with second one
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yo shits wack, sorry for beein so honest but ur rhymes just do lag
i got hot verses made 2 burn down yo shak, i heat the floor cuz i expect
^again with using verses, i got hot then use something else.
im sure its sounds better if mof had it n audio
lines 2 & 3 flow, put the bars together, then have something that flows with back n the same bar. these 2 bars dont flow
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fuck this shit it takes to long to explain line by line
mof yer shit was ok, its sounds better in audio
yer lines just didnt flow, they were all out of place
at the end some were flowing, but lacked creativity
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i'll break down the other fools verse, then vote

yo lines 11 & 12 didnt flow
the rest seemed decent
hard enough to put mof away n this battle i think
mof u sound pretty tight in audio, just come more creative
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vote/explict for now
hit up my battles

uppin for votes (2)...DONT SLEEP ON THIS BATTLE PEOPLE /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

OPener: Explict
Closer: MoF
Flow: Ex
Personals: Mof
Punches: Ex
Winner: Ex

Can ya hit this site up? Ex I think you already vote but MoF can you drop an honest vote here?

Might help if I gave ya the site huh? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91312

I THINK EX TOOK THIS BY YOU KNOW ACTUALLY RHYMING
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aight whatever dawgs.....

keep hittin it up....
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names: i dont think my shit didnt flow.....
u listened to my audios?......or was that just a conclusion?
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peace!